Great story. On the surface it's a very simple story, but your writing makes all the difference. This is a story that lingers in your head. I hope you return to writing.

Thank you so, so, so much for this story. It was just, wow... It's by far in my top5 of best stories of the last 3 years on this site. I wish I could show you my emotions of how happy it made me read this plot, and the ending was just amazing. It's so upsetting for me to find what I really enjoy, or actually, not being able to find it, because most stories are gts based, by a high manority of I would sad 98%. You totally made my day, and seeing the other reviews, a lot of other readers too, and that's amazing. Im sure there are lots of other people out there enjoying this type of stories, but dont say anything or just dont review. But I'm sure you also made their day. I'm so happy after what you wrote back, and I have to applaud you too, for that you stood "strong". Because you have no idea, how many times Ive seen it happen before. And I was so upset and mad at that other guy, who literally review like "amazing story Id love see gts stuff in the next chapter :p"... geez :'( It's always the same when an author steps forward and risks "crisitm" on here publishing a male based plot, and all the "weirdos" reviewing amazing story... but please add gts bla bla blub. It's the most rude thing you could do, and still people do it all the time. And whenever I see that, I breaks my heart, because mostly the author even follows that, and a once good plot totally gets destroyed for me. So I have to thank you again for this too, that you didnt follow that. Thank you sir, this story was amazing, and I loved every tiny bit of it. Especially the ironic ending was amazing, how he got "rescued", but before his arm was stepped on. I could had imagined his arm/insect leg being smeared to a pulp, and the boy maybe noticed that, and he thought it was a good thing to put the poot ant out of its "misery". I also imagined the last step not being totally outbalaned over the whole "ant", and its head still beeing intact, ooz flooding out of a crack, the antenna twisted and one half broken hanging over the head, the body a total mess of greenish brown ooz smeared and mixed with dust and sand particles to the rubbery sole, and the boy finally walking out of the bathroom, and the still alive and twisting ant, just his head part of the alive being, would be tortured again for some minutes, of experiencing the shoe going up and down in high speed towards the ground, and the boy just lazily sitting in his room on his computer, and again moving his shoes over the ground here and there, and one of that tiny movements, pressing momentum on the tiny dot under the sole where the head was still "living", and popping it too. I also have to say, that I loved so so so much more the idea and fact the boy wearing shoes, I imagine them old wearn out, I love converse sneakers for example so much. It's a so much more thrilling concept than "just" socks for example, or barefeet, which dont add that much humiliation that a shoe does, with it's dirty and rubbery sole, its threats under it, where the ant could fit inside one of those if its lucky, and so many more reasons. Sigh... thank you for this story man. Really. I hope youll write again plots like this in the future, male 12-16 giants are my favorite genres of shrinking and transformation stories, especially unaware is the best concept. I always loved ant/flea sized transformation the most, or shrinking sizes of around 1/32"-1/8" in a range of ant to dust particle or lint. I found a new favorite author and a new favorite story, I already printed it as a pdf and saved it in my favorite stories folder :] Keep up the amazing work!!! And have a nice day.

I think you did an awesome job on the unaware. I know it can be difficult at times, from experiance writing. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us!

Author's Response:

Can't wait to write more either

Just an adding after reading the review of Skechers... please dont. Please dont do this unbelievable thing people always plead, which is the most rude thing you could do. Please dont destroy this amazing story by turning it into another gts story, which are 99.998% of the stories on this site. If he wants to read the 99.998% other stories he can, but please leave the 0.002% for the few people enjoying reading male normal sized characters too from time to time. It's just there is no real platform for both pairings, and dont get me wrong, I enjoy both, but I also am really glad, that a few authors from time to time write in a very very rare niche, for the few people who desperatly try to look for these kind of stories, and never find them. And then it's even more rude, if people say "amazing story, but please change/add it into an ordinary gts plot like all the other stories on here^^".

The descriptions are great.  The level of unawareness is extreme.  Awesome job.  I hope some sneaker clad women join in on the fun!

Amazing plot, really well written, really really well. I was surprised seeing male giant/normal sized themed stories, which doesnt happen so often on here, but totally is such a nice surprise. Plot and narrator wise awesome, was fun so far to read. It's a lot better than most stories on here, which lack proper grammar and tenses, because a story has to be in past tense. I hate it so much that I cant favorite this or add you as an author... I guess I would need to make a new account, it's somehow bugged for me and I am stuck at 19 and cant delete or add anything. Keep up the great work!! It's so great to see/know an author enyoing to write male giant plots too. I love the character a lot you came up with and I totally was able to imagine him in the room, just staying there making something to eat or what he does, and for him it's just a minor change of moving of his shoes, but for the ants it's a hellish experience. You totally wrote it out in such a great way that the reader could picture the scene in his head. Loved the part how you wrote about the other ant totally becomming ant, loved how the boy wears his sport shoes which had a flat rubbery sole, which would literally reduce the ants to a thin film of slime, just maybe a leg or antenna twisting or being glued to the underside of the shoe when it slowly lifts again. Loving the story a lot already :)