[Report This]Date: July 04 2015 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 14: Controlled
Very good.
He could escape from Kara and find another woman. Little farts would be cool.
[Report This]Date: July 02 2015 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 14: Controlled
Wow!
Sexiest chapter yet!
I love the playful, yet dominating attitude of Kara.
The game that they played was very creative. I also like her dedication on the prize.
I hope he stays in there all day. I think that if he misbehaves, Kara should use some thread and tie him up to her panties. Or she can tie him up like a mummy and shove him inside her.
I really like this chapter especially since it's Kara having him alone which makes it like a private date, where no one can interrupt their fun, or in this case, Kara's fun.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: July 02 2015 3:08 PM Title: Intro & Chapter 1: The beginning
Well, since he's dead to the public, isn't there, like, no point in continuing the story? It doesn't make sense at all.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 13: Kara
Excellent story!
continues the tale, I can not wait...
[Report This]Date: June 09 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 13: Kara
Kara is freaking sexy! Need more of her.
I agree, let Kara dominate him with other parts of her body. (Perhaps, with her panties.)
I like Caroline's methods of torture, and maybe Kara can take a page from her friends book.
Kara could also tease him, give him a show with her clothes, rub his body on her body, carry him in her panties, insert him inside her, there are many possibilities, especially since this is at Kara's house.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: June 09 2015 9:57 AM Title: Intro & Chapter 1: The beginning
Excellent chapter .. Short so I'm hoping the next one will be up sooner and longer!? Ready for some Kara booty action!! Please continue!!
[Report This]Date: June 09 2015 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 13: Kara
Kara seems like a great character. Hopefully she's more than just feet though.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2015 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 12: Death
Excellent chapter, but how the heck would Caroline even think about searching her rommate's panty drawer?
I would've imagined that Caroline would've been mad at her roommate for stealing him and putting him in that drawer, because her roommate probably thought that no one would open that drawer besides her.
I love it when Kara sounds smart! She made that scene look like it was her whole plan and it was! I can't wait to see what she has in store for him, especially when she claims that a day isn't enough.
Ok, he's dead to the public, but it didn't change my perspective on how doomed the guy is. I mean, he was already doomed. Lol. However, you do make a good point by making this death become significant to our protagonist becuase now he knows that no one will look for him. I like it.
What is our protagonists name? I keep forgetting.
He should've warmed up to Kara instead of Caroline. Why would he ask for the crueler of the two for some sympathy? Unless, Kara is going to be more cruel in the future.
Hoping for some Kara sexy time next, but it's your choice to decide what happens next. I'm just trying to influence you. :)
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks. In regards to some of your qustions:
Caroline searched her entire apparetment for him before rumuging through her roomates room. This is why Kara was waiting for her because she was late. However i feel the previous chapter before that could have ended better and therefore this one started better.
I've actually written the story without a name for protagonist which seems silly but i plan on keeping it that way. hopefully it allows people to become more imerssed in the story. So you weren't forgetting, but thinking you had probably was what i was going for
Warmed up to Caroline because she was the only person in the room he could have convinced to stop this plan. Also while he doesn't like Caroline he has not enjoyed being under Kara's feet also.
Anyway thanks for the feedback
Date: April 27 2015 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 12: Death
What I just don't understand is why Caroline is so cruel to him. She claims to be a nice person, yet she starved and tormented him. I think this story could use either a rational explanation of why, or her realizing how awful a person she is.
Author's Response:
I justed wanted to show what a fluctuating peronality it is. I want people so see that Caroline can be nice as a normal person, yet crazy and controling. Really two sides of Caroline battliing each other, and i think in real life somebody would have this problem if this scenario was real. But yes i should probably word that into the story somewhere
[Report This]Date: April 03 2015 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 11: Clubbing
Loving the story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, it means a lot to hear people are enjoying my story. I hope you enjoy my next chapter as i see it a crucial to the plot of the story
[Report This]Date: April 01 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 11: Clubbing
I wish this guy was stuck in Kara's room. She was the sexiest of all the women in this story.
I kinda hope that he never comes back to Caroline. However, I like it when he thinks of her, and of all those bad memories.
Perhaps, the guy should stick with Caroline's roommate and the leave her to find someone else to stick with. (Hoping for a hot MILF to show up.)
Otherwise, Kara seems like the best option cuz Caroline was basically hell.
I like the fast pace of the story. It makes each chapter more meaningful and contributes to the journey of this little man.
Panty entrapment is my favorite scene so this chapter is one of my favorites.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much glad to hear that people are enjoying my story. Unfortuantly can't make promises with Caroline because both her and Kara are key characters in the story. Thanks again for the feed back
Date: March 09 2015 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 8: A Wash
I noticed the butt and scat tag so im looking forward to that. also some caroline feet action
[Report This]Date: March 09 2015 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 6: Routines and Dinner time
four weeks wow. id like to know more details into karas workout session!
[Report This]Date: March 09 2015 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 5: An item for Kara's foot
A permanent resisdent? I dont think she can get away with that.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2015 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 4: Day two...
Great Story! This was the chapter I've been waiting for!
[Report This]Date: March 03 2015 9:55 AM Title: Intro & Chapter 1: The beginning
I agree with footsteps please add the ass part asap and make it long and detailed lol but other than that it was a great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!! Hopefully it'll be up later today or tomorrow lol but that's just me hoping .. As always 10/10 :)
Date: February 07 2015 7:46 AM Title: Intro & Chapter 1: The beginning
Really like their personalities! Great story so far, hope he eventually finds his way between Caroline or Karas butt cheeks!
[Report This]Date: February 05 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 6: Routines and Dinner time
Really enjoying this story look forward to seeing more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: February 04 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 5: An item for Kara's foot
potato! Youre back! Please update Adam and Allisas story. Ive been waiting for over a year to see if Adam gets crushed unaware beneath her shoxs!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2015 3:22 AM Title: Intro & Chapter 1: The beginning
This story is really amazing! And I agree with Tom about everything! I hope this story continues to be updated and keep the chapters long and detailed. I love the feet and the ass. But ass is my favorite part! Lol I don't know what else to say other than I've been waiting for a story like this to come along! So keep it coming please?
Author's Response:
I will do my best to keep the story updated, i must say i did start this late last year before contemplating uploading. i'm enjoying writing it at the moment but it tends to be a love hate relationship with this story because i have to far to go. nevertheless i will persist with it. my goal is to complete and maybe write some 'what if?' spin off after i'm done