[Report This]Date: February 03 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 4: Day two...
Wow, I can't believe no one gave a review yet.
This story is an actualy story! Lots of people, lots of traveling and lots of activity.
I personally like Kara better becuase of her maturity.
I was getting a bit annoyed of Caroline's giggling and her attitude. Reminds me of a little school girl and she had some nasty ideas.
Kara reminds me of an actual doctor because of her motherly instincts at first. I love her commanding behavior. Not a fan of feet though. Hope Kara has some other ideas like below her waist. That's where the fun begins. Kara's attitude oozes a bit of sexy.
Is he 3 centimeters tall or 3 inches? 3 centimeters seems a bit too small.
I also love this hospital scene. Not many stories with stuff from a hospital. Also, the plenty of women with authority is a plus in my book.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I have big plans for this story and the hospital is just the begining, i won't say anymore because i'm afraid of spoiling to much