[Report This]Date: January 26 2023 8:31 PM Title: Candy
Great erotic story; I love the idea of the Cherry shop. There should be an option for the bead to be poppable/consumeable (perhaps some type of organic covering?). Really like the unaware element of the boyfriend and the casualness of Vanessa. I wonder if you would have any objection to letting me write a story or two using the Cherry shop?
[Report This]Date: May 23 2015 11:22 AM Title: Candy
It's awesome when you find a story that someone has written that mirrors a personal fantasy! Great imagery and I look forward to future chapters.
[Report This]Date: January 27 2015 9:56 PM Title: It's Wonderful
Well that got me shaking and enthralled :D
2 chapters in and already I'm pining for more :)
Great writing style and I love the concept of that sex-shop it's great.
Here's hoping you continue this series, even if not with Vanessa and James, maybe some other lad that gets transmuted into some other sort of toy for women :D
Author's Response:
If you are looking for more, I have two others up so far involving the shop Cherry.
They are Poison Ivy, and Carnal. Expect more.
Glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks for reviewing.
-Xxana
[Report This]Date: January 25 2015 4:25 AM Title: It's Wonderful
Wow :/ That was one of the best short stories Ive read in a while on here, why didnt I find your art before? This is a 10 out of 10. Do you have an email, Id love to share some ideas or requests. Ive not read all of your work yet but of what Ive so far, you're an amazing author.
Author's Response:
I do have an defacto email I use to read messages from readers. If you have a story idea, feel free to add it to a review!
And if you prefer to help create a story and keep it hush-hush until its complete, I totally get it.
-Xxana
Date: January 24 2015 1:55 PM Title: Candy
This was wonderfully well written. I never wanted it to end!
[Report This]Date: January 24 2015 6:16 AM Title: It's Wonderful
You came back with a great story though. Great work. You have some wonderful ideas.