[Report This]Date: February 01 2015 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 22: Sleep Disturbance
Laura is a great milf character. I really like her confrontations with Dave. Can't wait to see what she does next.
I really like this story, you're doing s great job.
aaron
PS will Wendy or Amy grow taller like the other sister did(sorry I forgot her name)
Author's Response:
I don't believe so, but I you never know. I kind of explain that in the next upcoming chapter. Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading :)
[Report This]Date: February 01 2015 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 22: Sleep Disturbance
Oooooo! What could Laura have planned? I'm very curious. And you wanna know something weird? The foot action you're putting into this story is really similar to ideas I have for my stories. It's freaky. Great minds think alike I guess! :)
Author's Response:
Ooooh the suspense! That is a little weird. I look forward to reading your new chapters!
[Report This]Date: January 31 2015 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 18: Well This Explains A Lot
Amy becomes more lovely to me when she punishes her sister in that way and shows Dave her night carees. Hope there could be more butt-related materials.
Author's Response:
I'll try to add some for you in the future :) Thanks for reading.
Date: January 31 2015 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 13: Back To Her Place
I must say I love Amy so much, especially when she says"I. Don't. Care.",which sounds
unassailable, confident, hardhearted and also playful. A charater who can play two extreme roles is so attractive. Amy makes this story one of my favorite ones on this stite. Thanks very much for contributing such a great story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Really appreciate your feedack and compliments. I'll try my best to continue the story as is and build from the feeback of the readers. Thanks again for reading! :)
Date: January 29 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Family Dinner
Yeah, it was cool. It's always nice to hear different characters thoughts
Author's Response:
Ok thanks fror your input :)
[Report This]Date: January 29 2015 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Family Dinner
Yep! I called it right.
Author's Response:
Nailed it!
[Report This]Date: January 29 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 20: Pure Pleasure
The alternate first-person pov's weren't bad. Who knows? They might even enhance things if he gets shrunken by Laura, again!
Author's Response:
Okay well I'll probably continue them at some point in the story due to personal preference. Thanks for your input and thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: January 29 2015 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Family Dinner
VERY interesting! I think it's time for round two of Dave vs. Laura. Me thinks he may regret being rude to Jen as well. Can't wait.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Hey did you like the different POV or no?
[Report This]Date: January 27 2015 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: My First Day
Sorry, forgot to add a rating
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: January 27 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: My First Day
Seriously one of the most amazing stories I have read in a long time. I get on daily looking for additions. Please keep it up. I am also curious about the shrinking coming back into play
Author's Response:
Sounds like people liked the shrinking portion. Good to hear. It should present itself in the future again. Thanks for reading and also for your compliment. Glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: January 26 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 19: Discrete Worship
Another amazing chapter! Dave really should be more careful playing with sleeping Amazon feet. A few questions keep coming to my mind when I read this story though. Is the mother's shrinking drug going to come into play later? Do the sisters growth spurts have a mischievous cause? These are just some things I keep wondering. Anyways, keep up the great work! :)
Author's Response:
It definitely has some potential to come back into play. In fact, it probably will, but we'll have to wait and see. Hopefully I devlop some more of the family story in the next several chapters. Thanks for reading as usual!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2015 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 18: Well This Explains A Lot
I'm taking a short break...to drink a GALLON of ice water!
Author's Response:
I am going to assume that's a good thing haha. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2015 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Nail Salon
Just curious: is Amy the only blonde in her family? I mean; do her sisters have black hair like their mother?*
* "The youngest one in curls?" ;-D
Author's Response:
That reference almost went over my head haha. Yes she is the only blonde in the bunch.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2015 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 10: An Angry Mother
Dave is obviously the first guy to LOVE being treated as a foot-slave by these gals.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2015 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 9: Let The Games Begin
"Lucy?" I thought the mother's name was Laura.
You got some splaining to do! ;-)
Author's Response:
Haha, you totally caught that one. I write many of these late at night, so typos are far too common and I'm too lazy to proofread by the time I finish, so I just upload em. So you're right, it's Laura. Thanks for reading.
Date: January 18 2015 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: My First Day
I accidently deleted a review, thinking it was to redo my response. I apologize. This is in place of that. I'm glad you liked the domination.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2015 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 14: A Small Get Together
Another great chapter! I was wondering if the "big three" would ever join forces on Dave. And I was surprisingly happy to see Jen taking Dave for herself. I don't know why, but I'm liking her more and more.
Author's Response: Good, glad you liked it. I'm trying to include Jen a bit more.
[Report This]Date: January 12 2015 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 2: Meeting Wendy
Simply amazing! I love how demanding and dominant his boss is; sounds like it's gonna be an interesting work experience.
Author's Response: Glad you like it!
Date: January 11 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 10: An Angry Mother
really nice story
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
Date: January 11 2015 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 10: An Angry Mother
I am really liking this story so far and it's very good for a first. There are some spelling errors, but nothing too bad. Personally, I feel like things are moving kinda fast. I will definitely be keeping my eye on this one!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Yeah I'm sorry for the grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that occassionally happens. Sorry if the pace is fast. I just wasn't sure how much I wanted to do or exactly what I am doing. I'm just kind of wingin' it one chapter at a time. Thanks for reading.
Oh and I have read most or all of your stories before creating this account and I enjoyed them. Thanks again.