[Report This]Date: October 29 2021 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that cliffhanger was actually good. I mean, even I got shivers for a second.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Date: October 21 2018 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will there be more? 😁
Date: January 13 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Drowning by pussy juice is a death scenario that I don't see often enough, so well done. I also appreciate yoour unique use of the camera PoV. I'm excited to hopefully see a second part to this.
[Report This]Date: December 21 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story. I love the theme and the perspective. I cannot wait to see what Amber does to dean. There were minr spelling errors and the flow could be better but still its a great story. Keep up the great work.
[Report This]Date: December 21 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I never read a story like that before! Nice idea.
It was was dramatic, sexy, and maybe scary at the same time which is a good thing.
Seems like a giantess horror movie. I like it.
[Report This]Date: December 20 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the fact that this storry revolves around him watching this happen on hidden camera. Would of been neat if they didn't find out right away, have him awckwardly reveal it on accident or her come up and ask for something and see it. But can't wait to see what you do with this!