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Reviewer: emshoshoshe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2021 9:46 AM Title: Sisterly love

good job

Reviewer: master369 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2017 7:09 AM Title: Sisterly love

Wow, great story!  Some good detail on what it must have felt like.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2017 11:59 AM Title: Sisterly love

I'm glad to see this continue! I was afraid you abandoned it. I hope Janet gets what's coming to her in the final chapters!!!

Author's Response:

I had the writer's block. It took me a lot to figure out chapter 12 which is quite longer than the others. Thanks for your feedback. I'll publish the final chapter (epilogue) soon.

:)

Reviewer: Haloichigo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2015 2:26 PM Title: Sisterly love

I wasn't sure if I was going to like this story and heck was I surprised. The level of detail is more than what is commenly found, which is a great thing for me. I love how much feet is involved and the size of the tinies are also great. The unaware element is great and especially between mother and child. I hope for more great chapters in the future.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I've added some new chapters, not unaware though. I hope you like it as well.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 2:24 PM Title: Itsy Bitsy

nice story

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 12:45 AM Title: Itsy Bitsy

Great work. Every chapter has been exciting

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2014 7:34 AM Title: Fear and glass

nice story so far



Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2014 5:34 PM Title: Sisterly love

I like it but I am slightly confused. It is set in the same universe as your other story, and only Chris had the memory protection chip, so how come John's mom remembers her son?



Author's Response:

Fixed. Thank you for spotting the error,

Reviewer: Superdude9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2014 2:59 PM Title: One way ticket

Not going to lie, I did not see the whole "Janet killed her father" thing coming. Very well done, I'm impressed. Seeing how this appears to be an all unaware story, I'm very excited for where this is going!



Author's Response:

Thanks, the twist suprised me as well ;)

 

I'm slowly writing the next chapter, sorry for the delay, Christmas is a busy period.

Reviewer: Dante123113 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2014 5:24 PM Title: Sisterly love

Loving it already! Can't wait to see more!

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