Date: March 05 2015 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
Really good story as always :) I love the detail of the vore and how willing the girl was to let it happen.
P.s sorry to hear about everything that is going on recently, hope it all gets better for you.
- Frankstergirl
Date: March 05 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very nice, I really enjoyed the chapter. Susan is a realy fun character to read about, so i realy dig these alternate tales. Its good to see you back again. Sorry to hear about your computer, the same thing happened to me a few months back. It sucks to lose stuff that you've been working on, so I understand not wanting to resume right away. Again, great job, and I look forward to chapter 11.
Date: December 19 2014 11:32 PM Title: Trouble on the Cruise part 1
That was great, I really enjoyed reading it. I personally am not into vore, but there is something about this and your other story, that I am cool with it. My favorite part had to be where Gina and Susan were using Linsey in bed. I'd love to see more like that in the future. Again, great job on the story so far, as well as the other story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that part :) I do plan on having situations similar to that in the main story sooner or later.
Date: December 19 2014 11:16 PM Title: Trouble on the Cruise part 1
Awesome chapter!
I'm still eagerly awaiting the next official addition to The Freshman, but this is a very welcome alternate story.
Author's Response: I don't plan on taking several more months between releases. I should have the next chapter up in the next week or so for the main story. Thanks for sticking around all this time.
Date: December 19 2014 9:01 PM Title: Trouble on the Cruise part 1
Another amazing story :) very well written loving seeing some of the familiar characters from the other story, reallh looking forward to seeing more
Frankie
Author's Response: Thank you! And don't worry, I'll be updating the main story very soon. :)