Date: December 19 2014 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I didn't understand much of this and I wish I hadn't googled necrotizing enterocolitis.
Still cracked a wank though. 10/10
Author's Response:
Ahaha it didn't occur to me that people would actually look it up. The inside joke is that necrotizing enterocolitis is just a stand in for something more sinister. I'm not at liberty to divulge more specifics, but either way, I'm glad you liked it. I'm not even sure if this story can stand on its own; people who spend time in the Chatzy will appreciate it more. Anyway, thanks for the review!
Date: December 19 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
An interesting one. I can appreciate some meta material every now any then.
I hope you haven't forgotten about poor Chuxi and his adventures in America, have you?
Author's Response:
Chuxi is not forgotten! I'll be writing the final chapter very soon. Thanks for the review!