Reviews For Julia
Reviewer: Black Neptune Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: December 28 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, that was a pretty good short story, and definitely hit all the bases that I like in size-play. I did notice a few typos, but nothing too serious, and that ending, I admit I didn't see it coming.
But good work on this. :)