Date: June 25 2015 8:14 PM Title: The Worst Day Of Your Life
This story should have been continued :(
[Report This]Date: March 09 2015 1:59 PM Title: The Worst Day Of Your Life
Your intro wasnt too short, it wasa good size. 10 lives, 10 deaths, I look forward to reading about the other 9
Date: January 24 2015 7:07 PM Title: The Worst Day Of Your Life
Thank you for the kind reviews :) I'm working on the third chapter right now, and will continue with the fourth chapter soon after.
Date: December 28 2014 6:16 PM Title: Second Life: The Party
keep up the good work dont give up its good and i love the veriety and just a sujeshton you should bring apryl backlater on i think it would be good i think it could become more of a buding relashosip
[Report This]Date: November 29 2014 2:06 PM Title: Second Life: The Party
It's a good story I like it :) i will say though it does seem to jump to differamt things very quickly. For example in min he's sleeping in her pussy then in the suddenly in the toilet. Other then that it's good :)
Author's Response:
Thanks again :) I felt like it did jump a bit too fast, I'll probably change that around in the next few chapters, haha once you get to writing this stuff sometimes it's hard to stop ;)
Date: November 26 2014 8:37 AM Title: The Worst Day Of Your Life
Sounds like an intresting story :) I look forward to seeing where it goes,
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback :) I'm gonna start working on the second chapter either today or tomorrow.