[Report This]Date: January 12 2024 8:53 PM Title: Tidings
Gee, why do all these stories get me so emotional. I guess that’s the goal isn’t it. Like, usually there is very little to no kinky stuff at all and yet I’m so incredibly engrossed in every interaction in these stories, and all the horrid circumstances we get characters in.
Like, seeing Lauren stand up to her entire family after they held her down and about murdered her fiancé…freaking trauma man. Glad it had a happy ending. Probably will with most of these stories but there is always a strong hint of bittersweetness that hurts my heart. I just want thing to go well all the time.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2015 1:18 AM Title: Tidings
Good story. With every Omega story we get a better understanding how this World/Universe works.
Author's Response:
Thanks. That's definitely the goal.
Date: June 05 2015 6:52 AM Title: Tidings
Loving this story especially the Mom. When she snapped his arm. Priceless.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: December 29 2014 11:53 PM Title: Tidings
Ah, well I didn't mean in the sense of a "direct" sequel in that its focus will be entirely on Bridget and Lexi, just that the events of Inheritance, given the cliffhanger in that story, seem like the events of that story are definitely the cause of the plot of your next foray into the Omegaverse.
*Spoilers* Still, with Alma seemingly a major player, and how prominent Lexi no doubt is after what happens, I can't imagine she'll just be left alone, nor that Bridget won't feel some responsibility for the train of events and want to do something about it. I also really hope they at least get a chance at a reunion after the time apart they need, or even due to the tumultuous events of the next story making their paths coincide--I still really feel the need to see some glimpse how those two's relationship ends up when all is said and done. :P
Anyway, great work as usual, and I eagerly await your next story, Omegaverse-related or otherwise.
Author's Response:
The aftermath of that cliffhanger will be the main focus of the next one, and Alma will be a major player with definite ramifications on Lexi. I can't say we'll see them directly in that story, but I do plan to eventually address what happened after Inheritance for Lexi and Bridget. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, and I'm glad you enjoyed.
Date: December 27 2014 2:33 PM Title: Tidings
While it didn't draw me in quite like Inheritance did, this was still a wonderful story and a fun new romp in the Omegaverse; though I think Inheritance just drew me in much more not because of any difference in writing quality, but because the general concept just grabbed me, personally (innocent person punished for crimes she didn't commit, especially at the hands of a giant friend who thinks she's guilty).
Overall, though, this story helped sate some desire for more Omega stories, and is still definitely better than most anything else on the site, so thanks once again, Jacksmith, for writing it.
I'm still greatly looking forward to the "sequel" to Inheritance, as well (crossing fingers for satisfying Bridget/Lexi meetup). I was hoping that since Ackbar's busyness was due to class work load and such that he might be finishing Consequences relatively soon (another story I really want to see the conclusion to), as I figured he'd be on Christmas break now and have some time to write. Know anything about his state of affairs, Jacksmith?
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comments; I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I wouldn't quite call my next Omega story a sequel to Inheritance, since it isn't meant as a direct continuation of Bridget and Lexi's story, though that still may very well appear at some point on its own. Ackbar's been busy, but I know he does have the Consequences ending planned out.
[Report This]Date: December 25 2014 5:36 PM Title: Home
Conglaturations! You completed a great story. Now, go and rest our heroes!
Author's Response:
Do I look like a ghostbuster to you?
[Report This]Date: December 25 2014 1:22 AM Title: Home
Nice happy ending. Glad Ian doesn't harbor any ill will towards Britney(can't say I wouldn't want her to have some kind of punishment if I were in his shoes). Kinda would like to see her find happiness too like Lauren and Ian. As for Lauren's mom... I don't know how even the omegas could make her change her ways sadly. Would be funny to see her being a plaything to some giant omega female(hopefully one in her mid 40s but that's for another time, I hope)
Even if her mom is a lost cause, Britney and Lauren have a chance to start fresh, hope that opportunity isn't squandered by either party.
Nice heartwarming story Jack.
Merry Christmas.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read/review. I can't say for sure whether Britney will appear again, but I hope this ending suggests things may eventually be all right for her and her sister. I do like your thinking though about the possible fate of their mother.
[Report This]Date: December 24 2014 10:51 PM Title: Home
Bravo good sir, bravo.
Author's Response:
Oh please hold the applause.
[Report This]Date: December 24 2014 1:35 PM Title: Home
Yay semi-happy ending!
Author's Response:
Hey now, I'd say at least a 3/4 happy ending.
Date: December 19 2014 10:25 PM Title: Break
Eh... Happy ending? Maybe?
Author's Response:
Very possibly!
[Report This]Date: December 19 2014 9:07 PM Title: Break
There we go, a truly heartwarming lesson amdist the sheer terror of the situation around them.
Bravo.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: December 19 2014 4:03 PM Title: Break
Nice to see the omegas earning their keep. Spectacular chapter it's just a shame there's only one left.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks man
Date: December 19 2014 3:05 PM Title: Break
Great chapter! I asked myself the same question as kKazumaR1 about the omega saver! Like Kusanagi, I opt for the semi happy ending because of mother.
Author's Response:
"Semi" happy is a fair guess, though hopefully the final chapter will improve that outlook a little.
Date: December 19 2014 2:05 PM Title: Break
While it's sad it had to take a brush with near death for Britney and Ian to come to some sort of head it's good they got out of there alive. I wonder if this Omega is someone we know or just a random Omega that was at the right place at the right time. Awesome chapter.
Author's Response:
This isn't an Omega we know, though she'll be making more appearances in future stories.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2014 1:50 PM Title: Break
Missed reviewing on the last few chapters but those were some very surprising turns. At least Britney's hatred came from actual emotional pain, pain that in an actual conversation she was able to reconcile.
Weird thing is Britney and Ian might come out of it with a decent brother/sister in law relationship.
Looks like we're headed for a semi happy ending, though the relationship with the Mother is still very suspect.
Author's Response:
You may be right about Britney and Ian. Unfortunately, there may not be enough Christmas magic to turn the mother in this story.
[Report This]Date: December 15 2014 7:20 AM Title: Chase
Well, that's an unnecessarily dark ending.
Author's Response:
Well, it's not over just yet!
[Report This]Date: December 14 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chase
Really liked how that turned out. Was not expecting Britney to have a beta friend and possibly lesbian lover. If she lives and Ian as well, this will shake that household(especially the mother) to it's very core. I'm starting to enjoy Britney's character now. I hope the mom(forgot her name) has some kind of epiphany where she suddenly likes betas( unlikely yes but plausible).
Great writing as usual.
aaron
PS when will Judy be back from her errands?(I hate to say it but she's the reason I like that series as much as I do)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing; glad you liked the stuff with Britney. Her mother may not be quite as big a fan, though.
Judy will reappear in a couple chapters. The climax of the story will heavily involve her as well.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2014 11:45 AM Title: Chase
Huzzah we have an emotional breakthrough...then bam impending doom.
Are you TinyDann in disquise? ;)
Author's Response:
I guess it is a little different than my normal MO of just skipping straight to impending doom, isn't it?
Date: December 14 2014 10:39 AM Title: Tidings
lol vyeah, great chapter. I admit i didn't saw lesbian side coming. Now remember the christmas is nigh, so be gentle in your writing !
Author's Response:
Hehe. Who knows, maybe I'm more the Nightmare Before Christmas type? >:)
Date: December 14 2014 9:58 AM Title: Be
Whatever it's, I hope the next chapter will be posted very soon!!!
Author's Response:
Good timing!