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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 1:38 PM Title: Things get worse

Another nice chapter. Sabrina is so mysterious. I'm not sure what else I can say - other than I am really enjoy this story.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2015 12:09 AM Title: Things get worse

This story is really good, I can't wait for the next chapter. This chapter was the perfect length and had the same intensity.

Reviewer: Renee Clearwater Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2015 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Suspense is killing me. I want to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 1:17 PM Title: Divulge

Another delightful chapter. I hope Mr. M. comes out alive. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 10:58 AM Title: Divulge

Wow intense chapter. I'm really excited for next chapter. 5 inches is my favorite. Just don't go into the nano size, because then there is no point.
Mr. M is in for the ride of his life.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really like your story so far. It's quite detailed, and the descriptions are lovely. Sabrina is a rather strange character and hopefully you'll have a reasonable explanation as to how she got her powers. Mr. McMurtry's predictament is quite saddening, actually. I know that many won't share that opinion of course.

Reviewer: TinyBrad Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed these two chapters and actually found myself disappointed there aren't more, soooooo here's to hoping the next one comes soon!

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Date: December 13 2014 9:36 PM Title: Subjection

Very nice.  The authority figure 'Teacher' turned into her 'mini-sex-slave'.  Her complete power slowly, growing stronger and stronger as he becomes smaller and smaller.

How did she actually shrink him though?  Will we eventually find out?  Or, will that remain a mystery?  I like the way that she traps him, while his boss is right there in the same room,... she instantly takes charge of the situation too!

Domination to the Max!  ... by a seventeen yr. old, to boot!  ;`)

Can't wait to see what she does next...  Great set up Man.

Love It! 

Reviewer: Don Walt Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

THIS is a really good story. Please keep going.

Reviewer: TheFourQuestionMarks Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2014 12:20 PM Title: Subjection

I love it! Can't wait to see why happens next!

Reviewer: Renee Clearwater Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2014 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story. One doesn't run across many with these sort of kinks. I'm looking forward to seeing how it progresses.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2014 10:03 AM Title: Subjection

I really like this story. I wonder what's going to happen next?

Reviewer: Tanafen Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very seductive. Great start. Please continue.

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

definitely keep going!

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