[Report This]Date: December 13 2014 5:44 PM Title: Role Reversal
I'm really eager to see how and when Kendra will get involved in all of this.
Pretty sure you already have something planned for that though.
[Report This]Date: December 13 2014 8:56 AM Title: Kevin's Secret
And the plot thickens. I like the learning the history between Kelly and Kevin, especially finally knowing where the shrinking stuff could've come from.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2014 4:01 PM Title: Homecoming
I can't wait to see what's next! This is one of the few stories I can't wait to see updated! I'm wondering when Jake will be revealed? I liked how Jake's feelings play a large role in this chapter, it gives him, and Kelly, human traits.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2014 2:30 PM Title: Role Reversal
Poor Jake, you can't help but feel bad for him.
He gave up everything just to be neglected and treated like an inconvenience.
Date: December 09 2014 1:51 PM Title: Role Reversal
I don't think Kelly knows how she feels yet. Jake and Kelly just met, so there hasn't been a chance for a relationship to develop. Unless Kevin is a jerk, I expect they'd get back together again. Jake might want to use his remaining battery power to call someone he trusts. I expect something to happen with the little girl. Characters are usually introduced for a reason. My hope is that Jake doesn't end up miserable by story's end.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2014 7:41 PM Title: Bumps in the road
I can't wait to see where this will take us! Does jake remember his parent's home and number and stuff? I don't remeber it being said either way. If so, maybe he could eventually call his parents or go to his parent's house with Kelly. Ideas for next chapter: jake gets away from Kelly for some reason, Kelly has siblings, etc. just some ideas for you to throw around, that is if the chapters aren't prewritten.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2014 10:28 PM Title: Reunited
Just read the entire seven chapters straight through,... it seems that you've written this methodically, and yet, it flows so effortlessly....
I'm seriously lovin' this! I like the way that you switch perspectives, telling it from Kelly's view, and switching back to Jake's,... great work! The constant undertone of his fear, keeps the suspence alive just enough; even though he keeps trying to appear like nothings bothering him...
... yet, she seems to know exactly how he's feeling. If these two don't get together, this is gonna really suck! LOL! (Piss on Kevin,.. who needs him, anyway!) Ha!
This is turning out to be favorite,... great stuff Sonic! ;`)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it, and yes I do have a plot in mind to be sure. Thanks again and keep on reading
[Report This]Date: December 07 2014 9:44 PM Title: Reunited
I am absolutely loving this series! I love these types of stories, I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: December 01 2014 6:05 PM Title: Role Reversal
Still loving it.
Personally, I find Jake's perspective (being small and helpless and all) more interesting and would prefer seeing it more with Kelly only every now and then, but you should do whatever comes naturally for you.
Date: December 01 2014 9:01 AM Title: Lillian's Best Friend
This is a realy nice history. Is good see the relation grow. Dont go to fast to the sex is a welcome change.
Of corse i enjoy sex in the history, but is realy nice see some romance.
Congratulations. Continue the good work.. and sorry my bad english LOL
Author's Response:
No worries, I know exactly what you meant. This story has multiple directions in mind so I'm glad you're enjoying it thus far. I'll have more of it out very soon. Thank you again!
[Report This]Date: November 29 2014 10:58 PM Title: Role Reversal
Ooh, this Kevin business adds some nice conflict to the story. Great chapter as always! Looking forward to finding out what Jake thinks of all this and how he's going to get out of his sticky situation. :)
Date: November 22 2014 10:54 PM Title: Role Reversal
Hey, could we get some boobs action in there?
Maybe when she finds some new,more reveiling shirts he could "fall" off her should down to the cleave below.
Also say around what breasts size. I recommend 34D
Author's Response:
Lol, I can't say there won't be any sexual chapters in this story but it's a bit soon for that. I will mention her breast size in a later chapter though. There's a slight hint in the first chapter about it.
[Report This]Date: November 22 2014 4:58 PM Title: Role Reversal
An interesting origin for a giantess: a guy swapping sizes with a tiny woman. It'd be fun to see some other normal sized woman (whom Jake knew when he was normal sized) get a hold of Jake and try to eat him. Lillian could save him from her mouth at the 11th hour, after he's had some time inside it of course.
[Report This]Date: November 18 2014 5:39 AM Title: Where Do We Go From Here?
Good stuff. I'm enjoying the character dynamics you've got at work here leading up into the trading of sizes and the trust building up between them. The dialogue is well-written, too. Keep it up.
Date: November 17 2014 10:26 PM Title: Role Reversal
Great character development this chapter! You couldn't have done it better in my opinion. :) Looking forward to more updates!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I was hoping throwing Lillian's point of view into the mix would make it more interesting for both characters in the long run
Date: November 17 2014 9:05 PM Title: Role Reversal
Honestly man I love the flow of your stories. You have a way with "gentle" genre that I can read over and over and enjoy. Keep it goin man :-D
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I wouldn't keep writing unless I were addicted to it myself so I'm glad I could keep you interested
Date: November 17 2014 7:08 PM Title: Role Reversal
I'm liking all this, I really am, mostly due to how well the characters work. I can't wait to see another chapter.
Anyone else feel like Lillian and Jake might have some prior knowledge of one another, just forgotten? I'm speculating again.
Damn it, Drac, got me doing it . . .
Author's Response:
I love to hear theories like this, actually. Only time will tell though...
P.S. I'm glad you're liking the story
Date: November 14 2014 10:51 PM Title: Role Reversal
The developing relationship between the 2 of them is this story's strength. I'd like it to remain gentle overall, but I understand that there would need to be some type of conflict or complication for the story to remain interesting. My first thought when she was looking through her belongings was that she did remember something, but didn't want to reveal it to him because it might affect their budding relationship. I can imagine that maybe her memories might slowly return as his memories disappear (maybe something to do with brain size and its capacity). I look forward to future chapters.
Date: November 13 2014 3:16 PM Title: Role Reversal
I've really enjoyed reading this. I especially enjoyed the size reversal part of this story also.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. That was certainly intended to be the highlight ;)
Date: November 13 2014 8:07 AM Title: Role Reversal
I love the work that you do. Your stories are always entertaining and comical at points and deliver a sense of drama that I think some authors have lost on this site. I've recently started reading your stories "My little friend" and "My little Girlfriend" and was getting on here to ask you/ beg you to know whether you will contuine "My little Girlfriend" or not. I believe a lot people love Bobby and Jen and I personally would love to see the storyline contuine. I hope you see this and respond when you can.
Thanks,
Parzival14
Author's Response:
Parzival14, thank you for your kind words and I do try to straddle the line between "semi-reality/drama" and some comedy because let's face it, we read these stories for a certain sense of playfulness, so even in their worst moments, I love to write characters that can make light of certain things, as I tried to do with this story and many others. Like most things in life, sometimes I wind up getting off track and not finishing my stories but I will tell you this: I've strongly considered finishing the "My Little Girlfriend" series and hopefully you will enjoy what I have in mind for that, that's all I'm going to say. Thank you again for your review. I will also probably be following up on this story and continuing it in some way