[Report This]Date: January 28 2015 4:59 PM Title: Meanwhile...
Ahhh the plot thickens like a nice roux. This is getting great, sonicfan.
For those of you who are still playing the dating field for mates, PROTIP: if a girl/guy says "if you do X, then we're over" and X equals something important to you (if and only if it is within reason; dont drop a date to feed your heroin addiction), then you should probably not be with that guy/girl.
Looking forward to your favorite chapter, Sonicfan!
[Report This]Date: January 28 2015 12:02 AM Title: Several Weeks Later
Wow, I'm having mixed emotions with this chapter. It's hard to comprehend, what's flowing through my mind.
So nice chapter, and I can't wait for the next one.
Date: January 27 2015 9:02 PM Title: Several Weeks Later
man kevin is a dick
i swear to shiva if kelly doesnt end up with jake i will find you and pour a thousand snakes into your car
anyways, things are taking a great turn. keep it up. 10/10 would beat kevin with a tireiron
Author's Response:
I'm glad I succeeded in creating much deserved animosity towards Kevin.
That originally wasn't my goal but several plot twists later, I thought about it and we'll see what happens,but let's just say I have a lot of fun things planned for the future of this story. I'm glad the reviews are mostly positive and I look forward to writing more and hearing back from the readers. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: January 27 2015 8:14 PM Title: Several Weeks Later
Yes! This story has always enticed me from the start, I can't wait to see where it goes! Please, keep writing!
Date: January 27 2015 8:12 PM Title: Kendra's Offer
"Dude, fuck yeah, im totally down for sex OH GOD KELLY FORGIVE ME"
pick a side
Author's Response:
It's a bit more complicated than that at this point in the story. Jake pretty much has no choice given the conditions Kendra has given him and he sees Kelly as unattainable because of the boyfriend and everything else. Given the circumstances, it's very hard for our main character to pick a side. But perhaps, I've said too much. I've been following your reviews and I thank you for taking the time to read my story and make reviews so consistently. I hope you've been enjoying the ride to this point
[Report This]Date: January 27 2015 7:46 PM Title: The Drop Off
Lovely. Loverly. I really like this tale. The only gripe i might have is that i have had some difficulty in understanding Kelly/Lillian's attraction towards Jake- is it there, is it not there- it just kind of felt like it wasn't truly there.
also, kendra sounds like a pip. hmm. 10/10
[Report This]Date: January 27 2015 6:00 PM Title: Taken Away
DUDE why'd you skimp out on the details with Kelly coming out of the shower?! hahaha no this is great. jolly good show old sport
[Report This]Date: January 27 2015 5:54 PM Title: Lillian's Best Friend
Oooh man, Jake would be a lucky bro if he got to shower with Lil-- er, Kelly. Yowza.
[Report This]Date: January 27 2015 5:37 PM Title: Lillian's Guilt
This is adorable. Two college twenty-somethings going on a date. 10/10
[Report This]Date: January 25 2015 7:43 PM Title: Back to normal?
Whoa,.. whoa, whoa! 'Back to Normal?' "Wa-ah?" How did his cellphone grow back with him? I thought he was 'stuck' at this size, ( he shrank down to Millimeter size, and when Lillian grew to normal,... he was then, suddenly at his 'New-Normal', size!
So now, then,... he would 'feel', like some mighty gigantic giant! - I'm I right? "*.*"
.... ha ha ha, just messing with ya! Although, I do... think that he's gonna shrink back down again!
...Back to 'his' normal size! ;`)hee hee hee hee
[Report This]Date: January 21 2015 4:04 PM Title: Role Reversal
That was really unexpected, I was expecting it not to work but that probably would've been too obvious.
Looking forward to seeing Kelly's side of the story again.
Author's Response:
Hey, it can't ALL be rough going for Jake. Although I guess we'll see ...
Date: January 07 2015 3:34 PM Title: Role Reversal
What are you doing here go write a bestselling novel
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I hope you enjoy my writing. I'm not sure how well my material would sell, though
Date: January 07 2015 10:26 AM Title: Role Reversal
I too get a bad feeling from Kendra. It's probably gonna go downhill quite quickly. Just my intuition. But on the other hand, this is a PG story, with no tags outside of humiliation, so maybe Kendra won't be a careless violent cunt like I predict.
Author's Response:
Lol please watch your language on my "PG" story
[Report This]Date: January 06 2015 6:01 AM Title: The Drop Off
Well, I have to say that this was a real 'eye opener'. Without knowing all that much about Kelly & Kevins background, I assumed that they were already deeply involved with one another,... and Jake, (although, she deeply cared for him) couldn't stand in the way of what they already had.
Kelly does have her doubts about Kevin though, (suddenly, becoming so attentive to her) but, she seemed to want to 'keep him around', and therefore, projecting that 'he' was her chosen one?
.... after this 'Drop off', though, it's pretty clear that Kelly has just 'royally' screwed-up!
Very emotional chapter. I had tears in my eyes at the end,... I knew that Kevin was going to screw everything up! Ha!
.... and, I have a real 'bad' feeling, about this 'Kendra?'
I'm glued to my seat! I can't wait to see what happens next! Great work Sonic!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I certainly set out to write a story that would eventually not be as "black and white" as it may have appeared.
With such an odd set of unrealistic circumstances, you'd imagine a big challenge would be to write people's reactions to these things as if they could really occur. That's at the core of my writing and I'm always intrigued about how the relationships/friendships and other factors are effected by my fantastical, fictional scenarios. That said, expect some crazy things in the chapters to come. Or don't expect it... that would be even more crazy, wouldn't it?
[Report This]Date: January 06 2015 12:20 AM Title: The Drop Off
So much emotions, it like the part in the movies. That is so sad, Almost enough to make you cry. :(
Can't wait for the next chapter. Plus to see how Jake and Kendra interact.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2014 8:15 PM Title: Change is inevitable
Yes! I hope you had a good Christmas! It's good to see you're back writing, can't wait to see the next chapters! I'm loving where this is going, and can't wait to see why Kendra was so accepting of his fate, and what he'll do about his phone. Maybe have Kevin shrink half of a charger cable or something? IDK.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, Dante. Yes, it's been a pretty nice season for me to rest up and enjoy the holidays. Looking forward to great things in 2015 and plenty more writing. Thank you as always for supporting my writing and I hope your holiday season was equally as amazing
[Report This]Date: December 29 2014 6:57 AM Title: Change is inevitable
I find you've got something very interesting here, in you're plot; the realism of the situation (with Kelly) as she, feels so concerned for Jake, but,... at the same time, has to get on with her own life and has such mixed feelings- blaming herself for his plight, and distracted by Kevin coming back into her life. - .... as most 'normal' people would, she herself, has no real love for him,-(as a tiny four inch tall man) she, wants to protect him, and loves him as a 'friend', but, unfortunately,... nothing more...
...which, really makes me fall for her even more! Ha!
Oh, well,... such is life!
I hate to see Kelly give him up, but this Kendra now,... she seems to be fascinated by this turn of events...
'Kendra'- I like the name. I picture the model that used to work at the 'Playboy mansion',... I think you know the one?
This could get a whole lot more interesting now, I can't wait to see Kendras initail reaction to her tiny 'exe'; and, why she seems to be so determinined to see him again,... especially, knowing that he's just four inches tall?
...the thought of 'her' as a giantess? Wow! ;`)
[Report This]Date: December 29 2014 2:33 AM Title: Change is inevitable
Really good story. Only thing i can think of would be more interaction with Jake and Kelly or soon to be Kendra. In a couple of the chapters Kelly would just shut Jake away.
There was no interacting. Like next chapter or the next next chapter. Have Kelly and Jake do something fun together.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2014 1:41 AM Title: Role Reversal
Wow that was a really good first chapter. It was perfectly the nice length.
Date: December 28 2014 10:21 PM Title: Change is inevitable
I am realy enjoing this story, awesome work!