Date: March 19 2020 5:20 PM Title: Moving On
It's a real shame you never continued this story was enjoying it too long ago
Date: October 18 2015 4:48 AM Title: Role Reversal
I seem to have found this story kind of late considering it wasn't updated since february, but it is absolutely amazing. The setup is one of my favorite. Not only multisize, but shrinking smaller than something already small is the best thing for me. I didn't expect to love a story with that "little" smut that much, but it was really enticing and made the more smutty chapters even greater. Definitely one of the best stories I've read on this site, I hope you do continue it someday.
Cheers
[Report This]Date: June 01 2015 2:53 AM Title: Moving On
This is such a good story! Please continue it again!
[Report This]Date: March 01 2015 5:00 PM Title: Role Reversal
I miss this story. :<
[Report This]Date: February 10 2015 12:12 AM Title: Moving On
Emotional chapter. Kelly is drama, she has Jake so she need to relax and have fun. And focus on returning to normal. Once they do that the trouble will be stay normal.
Love the chapter, glad they we're having fun.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2015 8:08 PM Title: Moving On
Nice! Only problem is a mispelling, I also do the same thing though, you spelled noone as one word, it's actually two, no one. I do the exact same thing, every time too. But besides that, I freaking love it so far! Great chapter, and ending! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: February 09 2015 7:32 PM Title: Moving On
Ok.. now that was hot..
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you agree
[Report This]Date: February 06 2015 5:40 PM Title: Friendly Bonding Time
Great chapter, you really know how to keep plots advancing! I'm still loving it, and as always, keep on writing!
[Report This]Date: February 06 2015 12:41 AM Title: Friendly Bonding Time
I love this chapter. I can't wait till they get growth stuff. And Jess, can finally see him without squinting.
Keep up the amazing writing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2015 6:14 PM Title: Jess Returns
Awesome chapter! Keep on writing, can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 02 2015 10:44 AM Title: Jess Returns
Awesome chapter, now they just need growth stuff. So Kelly can be normal and Jake can be back to five inches. I really don't like the nano size. So hurry and help both of them.
Author's Response:
I'm afraid I can't "break the fourth wall" in my stories and offer a 'hand of God' to help the protagonists, but we'll see what happens, for sure. Glad you're liking the story
[Report This]Date: February 01 2015 12:41 PM Title: Making the next move
Yay! This will be fun to see what happens next. As always, you still write amazing stories, please keep writing them!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your support!
I've had a lot of fun writing this, so I'm glad to hear there are people who equally enjoy reading it. I will do my best to conitnue on this and other stories
Date: February 01 2015 6:03 AM Title: Role Reversal
I hope Kevin got a big whiff of the perfume on the way out. It might be amusing to see that model with a shrunken Kevin. I think that Lil/Kelly and Jake's relationship is perfect with her being the larger one.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2015 12:41 AM Title: Making the next move
Alright, I like where this is headed. I changed my mind Kelly and Jake are good together. Just because Kelly finally realize everything.
And Kevin, he has problems. Dude needs to get help. Blind with jealousy that wasn't there.
Anyways nice chapters, can't wait for the next one. Plus I'm excited that your making this story longer.
[Report This]Date: January 29 2015 5:18 PM Title: The More Things Change...
Wow, great to see them shrunk again! Wonder what's going to happen if Kevin finds them?
Author's Response:
Only time will tell...
Also, kudos on being my 50th review!!!
[Report This]Date: January 29 2015 8:44 AM Title: The More Things Change...
Ahhhh this is great. WOnderful chapter. I am very happy that Kelly and Jake are finally able to be together emotionally and sexually, despite being in their predicament.
The scene where kelly dropped the trenchcoat is one of the hottest I've read in quite a while- the image you created is perfect. perrrrfect.
13/10 best chapter in the story so far.
Also, heads up: this line seems to have a typo. ""I don't feel like much of a hero... I gazed down over Kendra's hand, ... Kelly gave me a warm smile as she kept me cradled in her hands."
Author's Response:
Thank you very much (and yes, that was a clear typo, we can see I might've gotten a little over-excited as I wrote this one).
I definitely have been setting up for this chapter for a long time. I had it in the works for quite a while so it was very satisfying to be able to write it out and have it come to life. There is still a lot more to come though, and hopefully you'll enjoy those chapters just as much, if not more. I appreciate the unrealistically high rating of 13/10
Date: January 29 2015 4:58 AM Title: Role Reversal
I actually agree with Flaming Heart that at times, it's hard to really like Kelly as she's genuinely grateful for the help she's gotten, but doesn't do much in return for Jake.
But every character has their flaws in this story, that's the great part about it.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2015 11:40 PM Title: Meanwhile...
Well I think Jake and Kendra should be together. Kendra was being a little harsh at the end of this chapter.
I just don't like Kelly. She just thanks Jake nothing more. She got her size back thanks to Jake. But leaves him in a heart beat for her ex boyfriend. Then cut all connection with Jake. Only to come back begging for help.
Author's Response: Interesting take... I honestly hadn't thought of it like that but you make some good points. I think that's why I find myself so interested in this story though. There are many points of view to take and not too many "black or white" scenarios.
Date: January 28 2015 9:37 PM Title: Meanwhile...
Since Kendra knows about the shrinking, I feel Jake could have explained the situation and it would of turned out with less fighting, and maybe some back-up against Kevin.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2015 5:26 PM Title: Meanwhile...
Jake's text message back to Kelly: "WTF! You did it, Again? ..."""God""" I can't leave you alone for a second!" What some chics will do, just to suck ya back in again, and screw up a sure-thing date night with the hottest piece of ass in town" " She's a Model for cryin out loud!" ect. ect. ect...
Hee hee hee hee Not really,.. I just couldn't resist it! This is so serious, and so dramtically written, I just find myself completely drawn into the whole thing!
I have a feeling that Kevin was planning on using that 'perfume' on either Kelly, or the red head,... Or maybe both? I wonder if Kevin has ever met Kenra? Hmm, maybe those two have something going...
You really got me wondering now, Sonic. Great stuff!
I'd like to see Kendra shrink Kevin, and take him to that restaurant,... maybe ?
Author's Response:
I really loved your "text" as Jake. Definitely funny stuff. We'll have to see how it all plays out but I like all of your ideas. It's technically not known at this time if Kevin or Kendra know each other.