Date: December 20 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
@faintsmile. Interesting ..., can't wait to see what you have planned out!
[Report This]Date: December 20 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
This story gets better and better. Glad to see Isabelle isn't just some narcissist. And that she actually cares. Can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Author's Response:
I am glad you are liking where things are going! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: December 20 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting chapter. Seems as if isibelle isn't as bad as I thought...Or is she?
As for the "teaching methods", could this maybe be where Hadly finally meets a guy? Ossubly a partner for her field work?
as for Eva, would certainly complicate things, but, as other readers said, maybe she'll take a liking to Hadly's brother?
Author's Response:
Or is she?! Ha! I like the way you think!
I have the "teaching methods" planned :} I have also begun planning romance possibilities and I hope you enjoy them. There will be no boys in the next chapter, but maybe the one following :3
Date: December 20 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
Eh... So Isabelle is false bad girl who want to keep anti low classes reputation because of his father's company and keep her quality of life? And why does she join law class? I don't get it.
Author's Response:
I strongly believe that it is rare for someone to be the way they are and to do the things they do without motivation. People are complicated and Isabelle is complicated. I will let the next chapters further explain her, as I understand how her confessions may seem out of place.
Date: December 16 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Will we see Hadley's family again? I think her upper class hating brother could do with getting a love from a giantess.
Author's Response:
My short answer is yes. My long answer will come in the chapters I write :}
[Report This]Date: December 16 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
@tinyguy, yeap, it could also go on like this ! :D It would only be so sad for the girl who's in love with the other girl, if the other girl hasn't got any romantic feeling towards her... :S
A very great chapter ! It's a little hard for me to read, I found your vocabular a little bit..sophisticated maybe ? Anyway, I think you get the idea.. ^^ It's only to tell you to keep on writting like this, all the expressions, feelings, actions.. of the characters are pretty explained and it gives us a good picture of the story and what's happening at every moment. We see into the characters like we were here, and it gives a very living dimension at your story :)
Like I've already said, Eva's hate towards herself is so...amazing !! Usually, with a plot like this one, it should be the mini who would be sad and angry with the current situation, but no ! It's the giant one who hates herself and not Headley, she hates the society, the human nature and everything that composes her world... Yeap, anyhing more to say, it's very beautiful...
I'll tell you, the wait is worth it ! So please, please, please, keep on like this ! I'm already waiting for the next chapter, good luck like always ! :D
Author's Response:
I forget sometimes that your first language is not English. You do write rather well!
I am glad you are enjoying Eva's character. I feel like she is human - that romantasized notion we have of what it means to be human.
I am glad the wait did not kill anyone, lol!
[Report This]Date: December 15 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
Greet chapter. Can't wait to see what the "major events" are! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am really excited about writing them :D
Date: December 15 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
I liked the scene with Jazeera and Hadley, it shows Hadley helping her host family and she isn't so helpless at all ,a more balanced relationship that isn't totally one way at all, its pretty good.
Author's Response:
Hadley may be small, but she has got it together! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: December 15 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks so much for another update for as much agony as the waiting is. still loving the interaction, short as it was. So glad to see Eva going for that. Last chapter it seemed like her guilt for her underserved power and position in society was crushing her soul. Hopefully this will allow her conscience to make it's amends. Keep up the good work please and thank you
Author's Response:
Sorry about that wait, lol
And thanks for reviewing! I am glad you are enjoying their interaction!
Date: December 08 2014 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
@dood07. Maybe one of them likes a boy, and the other (either Hadley or Eva) has feelings for the other girl?
Author's Response:
Ho ho, now you all plan to tag-team me? I see how it is! >.>
Perhaps I shall grant this desire, but know, it would come at a cost! *eerie music* SLOWBURN.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2014 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for this chapter !
Firt of all, I would like to let you know that your response to my last review really pleased me ! It's you who's taking your time to share this beautiful story, and you're thanking me for reviewing ^^
Anyway, it was cool to come back in the school, hope there'll be more interactions with other students ! ;) Also, the idea of Eva's fear (giving her power) is a good one, very interesting ! She must control herself ant it explains her deameanor since the beginning of the story.
For my part, I so would like to see a love relation between Headley and Evangeline... *.* I was sensing it when Eva was playing basketball and she was giving more attention to Headley than the play..
Again, thanks for the chapter ! Good luck for the suit ! :D
Author's Response:
:D
I am glad you enjoyed the chapter! And I always enjoy your reviews!
Eva is certainly allowing herself to be defined by her fear. I find it sad, but I believe that Hadley balances her nicely :}
It would seem a number of people are pushing for this sort of thing, lol. Perhaps with enough encouragement, I will see 'reason' ;)
Date: December 07 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
@faintsmile, that sounds like a pretty cool idea, but I think it'd be great to see T least one of them meet a guy while still in school. Maybe Hadley likes a guy her own size, or just one class above, but the guy's going after Eva?
If you're not sure about how long you want to take this, maybe divide it up into different stories; this one focusing on the two girls in their younger years (17/18-21), then have the next one focus on the girls as more mature adults?
Idk, just my two cents... Some of which is probably a bit skewed from me writing my own mixed sized story lol.
Anyway, wgatever you decide, good luck!
Author's Response:
I will see what I can do :}
I was actually considering making the story of them being older a sequel to this one. I do not know that I could have the patience to write a full four to five years of their life without a timeskip, lol
Thank you very much for your input! And thank you for continuing to read!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
Really enjoyed this chapter and was glad and thankful that Sydney was kind to Hadley. Looking forward to what happens next.
aaron
PS Evangeline would make an excellent physical therapist
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
Date: December 07 2014 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
@faintsmile, I totally understand if you don't want the story to go in that direction, but reading back through the reviews, it seems like quite a few people are supporting the idea :)
Either way, can't wait to see how things turn out!
Any idea as to when the next chapter wi be out?
Author's Response:
Mmm, that they are. Are you among those supporting the idea?
I know that if I have the time / energy / patience for the long haul, my ultimate plan is to move beyond Eva and Hadley's high school year, to when they are in their twenties (spoiler alert: neither dies before finishing high school). With that being said, I do not know that romance would happen during the high school segment, but I would be more inclined to include it in their future.
As for the next chapter, I am cursed with perfectionism and a meticulous mind. I work fairly slowly and sometimes it is hard to truly gauge these things. I hope to never make the wait more than a week, if I can at all help it, but I make no promises.
Date: December 07 2014 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
This was probably the best chapter so far! Great character development.
It also gets me thinking. I'd imagine they're at an all girls school, but Hadley or Eva are bound to meet a guy they like eventually. I wonder. How that'll change things if/when it happens.
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you very much!
>.> Why are you in my head...?
Haha, yes, I have considered this very thing, actually. I have cycled through numerous possibilities - one finding a partner, both finding partners, neither but one or both wanting to, one liking the other, different gender combos for each scenario (other than the one where one likes the other, although I suppose one could start to identify as male), or ignoring romance/sexuality/gender entirely... everything. I am waiting for the characters to let me know their thoughts, lol
Date: December 07 2014 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great story so far .
Here is some ideas where the story could go and hope include in all the other fine direction you will think up for this story to good.
Beside Hadley pushing for Eva to get into the Safety Policing Division.She also show Eva Here Bisexaul side and opens up eva Bisexual and as a result of both learns to trust herself and also effort Sydney comes the closest of with Eva and Hadley (both plutonicly and other wise(Threesome -That in time a more some with knd S class and F class and other class guys and then in other Lady) all as friendly to all classes as Hadley and Eva.
All The Best
Author's Response:
Thank you for your input! I have considered making romance and sexuality a part of this story, as it is an aspect of the human experience, but as of right now, it is not guaranteed, and honestly, not likely. I hope that does not turn you off of the story. However, to compensate, I will promise to make an effort at some fan servicing :]
Date: December 07 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice touch, really shows how committed Hadley is to rising beyond her class. Eva, not so much but I wonder if giantess morning breath is a thing here.
Author's Response:
Haha! Damn, I had actually meant to put something in there about that. Guess I will have to leave that for another time :3
Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: December 04 2014 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow.. I swear this chapter is one of the most interesting I've ever read on gtw !! I so liked it, the story makes me wonder about our society, and the possibility that it could have been like this.. So real, so living, so sad and beautiful in the meantime. It gives me the envy to hope that things can change, and I definitely hope it will.
Great explanations, great background, great characters, great plot... It's time you give us some great action, and this story will finally be a masterpiece !
Thank you so much, your work is awesome. Please keep us enjoying this, and good luck !!
Author's Response:
Dood, you are a fantastic reviewer! Thank you so much for each of your reviews!
I have been working on chapter 7, trying to get the tone just right, and I am hoping to post it within the next day or two!
Again, thank you so much for reviewing! It is reviews like yours that make me want to write :}
Date: December 01 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good informative chapter, I hope to see more soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I hope to get a new chapter out soon!
Date: December 01 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Really enjoying this. So nice to see a laid back slice-of-life story that focuses on two differently sized people being friends. Keep up the good work and can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for keeping with the story this far! I do so enjoy a little slice-of-life.