[Report This]Date: July 26 2018 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story was such an epic read. I really like how the giantess fucks and destorys most the city. Then finishes with her giant boyfriend. Not to mention they way in which she carries out her cruel destruction upon the city. In any case, keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: July 26 2018 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story was such an epic read. I really like how the giantess fucks and destorys most the city. Then finishes with her giant boyfriend. Not to mention they way in which she carries out her cruel destruction upon the city. In any case, keep up the good work.
Date: August 17 2017 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
It's a shame there isn't more. You have quite the story brewing. A few little mistakes here and there but overall a very nice read.
Date: August 17 2017 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was a wonderous start. Very descriptive. Except for the thing about nuclear bombs; I thought that was a sily analogy (do you know how many nuclear bomb there are in the world?).
[Report This]Date: February 03 2015 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is pretty good. The action is clear, and I like the shift in perspective between the two chapters. There are a number of incomplete sentences, however, possibly meant to capture a moment or add to the atmosphere. That might be accentuated with paragraph breaks.