Date: October 30 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
This definitely feels better than BFG, I like it and hope it'll be sustained throughout the entire story. Jessica's backstory felt both engaging and made her feel likable at the same, good start there.
Author's Response:
I hope it is as good as the original series and this Jessica will be a little different. I hope that you enjoy the rest.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
So far, I do like the premise of a medieval story, which so far, has proven to be leagues and bounds ahead of any other story set in medieval times. I won't nitpick as to how the hell a peasent has FIFTY gold coins, when the average salary at that time for a blacksmith was two silver coins everh two daysdepending on fief, or anything else like that due to the magical naturs of the story. Once I got past the first four paragraphs , i became hooked.
I do hope you can keep this up at a good pace. This is certainly a story I can finally look forward to, as there are very few I am reading nowadays.
Author's Response:
The pace should be the same as it was in the main series, I hope that you enjoy what you read and for the fifty gold coins, maybe Tucker had saved them over a number of months.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
I'm definitely liking the direction you got going here. I hope it's just as lengthy as the main story. Any plans to bring in new characters who aren't in the original BFG? Just curious.
Author's Response:
It could be as long as the main series and I have plans for many characters who will be original to this story. Thanks for reading.
Date: October 29 2014 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
Great intro chapter! So far so good, I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes from here!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope you enjoy what is to come my friend.