[Report This]Date: March 09 2015 2:41 PM Title: Cassidy to the Rescue
I didnt know this story had ended? it seems like it could go on for another 8 chapters. any spinoff ideas inthe future?
I loved the anal vore content with amber and the unaware parts were really good. the ending was a surprise and wasnt what I expected.
Date: January 21 2015 10:05 AM Title: Cassidy to the Rescue
Wow a very dramatic story with all those unaware killings and i had to read it all through one night *rubs eyes* couldnt sleep untill i reached the end.
Only two things i am missing. First is as they watched the last of the video clips, allison and cassidy prolly should have realized how many little "specks" they had killed already and that should have caused some kind of emotional reaction no? And in the end Allison should have known that she killed her step father. I mean she is threating her mother for cheating on stepfather, unaware that she ate him alive.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2015 7:17 AM Title: Cassidy to the Rescue
This was a great story! There was a little too much toilet for my taste, but otherwise, each chapter and part had me on edge! Love the unawareness of the Giants and the cruelty of the aware ones. Hopefully, you'll make another great one! :D
[Report This]Date: November 12 2014 10:18 PM Title: Ground Zero
I meant to write a review for this story after I first read it, but I never had the oppertunity until now that it's come to it's conclusion.
I was sad to see this story end what seemed to be a bit abruptly, but it was enjoyable none the less. :) I'm not very good at critiques or anything like that so I won't bother try, suffice it to say there were a lot of aspects to the story as a whole that I enjoyed both for it's erotic nature and the underlying plotline.
I hope you end up continuing with a sequel of some sort, I think you left enough things open for that to happen. :)
[Report This]Date: November 12 2014 7:27 PM Title: Ground Zero
One of the best stories on here!! PLEASE write a sequel!! You did the ass perfect!! I want more of this story!! Write about finding a cure!! This HAS to continue! Please and add just as much butt if not more buttaction as this one has!! 11 out of 10 in my book!
Date: November 12 2014 5:45 PM Title: Ground Zero
nice series! i can't wait for your next work =)
Date: November 01 2014 10:28 PM Title: Lost and Found
Can't wait for what you have next a love the detail of the unaware toilet scenes and just everything your updates make my day.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2014 4:03 PM Title: Investigation
One of the best chapters Ive read in a long time. Just amazing man. Awesome length and details, great pov switches. Perfect telling style, grammer, tenses, everything is perfect. Loved the events towards the end. The idea that one of two best friends get involved, one shrunk to ant size, and the other making out with a girl and the micro gets in "between" them always was one of my favorite concepts. Id love if Paul gets accidentally swallowed by his best friend, or if they do anal and he gets inserted on their 2nd play through. Really amazing story, loved your vore and digestion hints, a lot of authors dont ever write out what happens after the stomach, mostly not even know how digestion works, what the small intestine does, what the large one does, and never do the aftermaths. Cant wait for the next chapter. Hope it stays unaware and the same style, amazing story!
Date: October 24 2014 5:39 PM Title: Calling for Help
love the unaware style you have going hands down best micro story out there currently!
[Report This]Date: October 20 2014 8:23 PM Title: Ground Zero
Wow, this is a really good unaware story! I like how you incorporate both the views of the shrunk people and the regular size folks. I like butt, boobs, and unaware and you do a perfect job showing all of them. A+, I'll be looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: October 20 2014 5:55 PM Title: Calling for Help
Fantastic story so far. Awesome to see another amazingly talented author of micro unaware genre, which is too damn rare to find these days. Dont know what you had planed but it would be great seeing some unaware anal vore too maybe. Even the story is yet ongoing it's already better than mostly every other story published on here over the last couple of months. Would add you to my fav author list but the size seems bugged about that :/ Keep up the amazing work!
[Report This]Date: October 20 2014 5:47 PM Title: Calling for Help
Very enjoyable so far, good style and pacing.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2014 8:58 AM Title: Ground Zero
i thought it was amazingly written and id love to see where you take this story to next
[Report This]Date: October 19 2014 8:57 AM Title: Ground Zero
i thought it was amazingly written and id love to see where you take this story to next
[Report This]Date: October 17 2014 9:27 AM Title: Ground Zero
I liked it, and am patiently awaiting the feet parts!
[Report This]Date: October 17 2014 12:46 AM Title: Ground Zero
Hahaha, niiiiice. This day keeps getting better and better, a new favorite author. And this is your first story, too? Damn. I love it so far! Really good descriptions, especially that toilet scene. I'm a bit of a toilet connoiseur, and this is one of my faves. Impressive work.
I do have to concur with Toku, I wish the gum scene had been described a bit more. Seeing what you could do, it would have been interesting to see. The butt crush was also well done, but nothing beats Paul's fate. I do hope you do some more butt stuff, but I'm selfish, haha.
I can't wait for the next chapter! Was I reading the end note right, have you already finished them? If so, put them all up! It'd be a real shame for this to be lost like so many other great stories, forgotten in the underbelly of an old computer. :P
[Report This]Date: October 16 2014 7:44 PM Title: Ground Zero
Superb!
Love what you've got so far. I'm not sure how you're going to continue, since the police coming and whatnot probably means the end of the fun, but I'll trust you on this, haha.
Loved the unaware fates of the shrunk characters so far. I kinda wish the first girl's struggling in the tissue and gum could have been continued, but im a sucker for bodily fluids stuff. Similarly it wouldve been nice for me for the brother to have remained attached to his unaware sister a little longer.
Loojing forward to the next part - keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2014 5:18 PM Title: Ground Zero
This story is one of the best stories on here that I have read!! And I love how long it is!! And I love the amout of butt action you have included in it!! And everything butt related! Lol... Anyways yes please keep this story coming!! Keep it long and detailed.... Don't forget to add more butt stuff as much as possible lol!! And keep one shrunk person a main character if possible without killing them. Please don't quit this story... Il be on tomorrow to check to see if chapter 2 is up :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. As for the next chapter, I'm a little short on time right now and will probably post it on Monday.
Date: October 16 2014 7:17 AM Title: Ground Zero
You did a very good job on this one. It's a nice story and I thinks it's well written. I myself would love to see how this will going on so it leaves just one thing to say. Keep it on! ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Nice to see people are reading my stuff.