Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2014 12:55 PM Title: Manipulation

I think all of your stories are delightfully hot.  Your style of narration is almost stream of consciousness, immersing the reader in all the intense sensations and emotions.  You've found an excellent balance between detail and pacing that tells us what we need to know while keeping us in the action.

What I treasure most of all about your stories is your focus on your female protagonist's perspective.  I want to know what she's feeling and why she does what she does, her deepest desires and immediate experiences, and you deliver every time.

If you're still taking requests, I'd love to see a female predator who has decided to keep one of her tiny victims around, perhaps because she has a personal connection to the tiny, or maybe just because the tiny does a good job stimulating her pussy.  She still captures and devours new victims on a regular basis, of course, and perhaps she makes her pussy slave listen to them being digested as an incentive to keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Story smith Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2014 8:37 AM Title: Manipulation

First story of yours i'v read really interesting stuff ya got here. The shrinking was rather limited. But it was still good.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2014 5:50 AM Title: Manipulation

     This seems to be more focused on 'subservience', and 'subtle domination'.  The actually shrinking part was barely mentioned...

  Your writing is very well done.  I would have liked to see the victim survive; only to prolong his entrapment, and cast him into her prison of miniature male slaves.

..... nice work Ms. Xxana!