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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 1:27 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual

I like the perspective shift but I hope you stick to the gts point of view mostly. Shes a really interesting character and the little monologues that run through her head make it a blast to read! One thing I found odd about the gts's character is why she wouldn't turn to prisons for nourishment instead of feeding on innocents. I mean its obvious she wants to try to keep death and chaos at a minimum and she feels really bad about having to eat innocent people...so why not eat convicted rapists, murders, etc, instead? Just a thought.

Reviewer: licksquid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2014 8:41 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

That's definitely a road less travelled. I want to see more of it.

Reviewer: desslok Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 8:46 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

How good is this story by this site's standards? Really goddamed brilliant. You really expressed the emotion and trauma going on in her head, a side of the genre not often seen.

 

Plus there's all kinds of directions this story could go. A slow loss of humanity (and a recovery from the brink), accidental bonding with a 'victim', something from the victim's point of view, coming to terms with her basic needs. Hell, even just day to day existance beyond the need to eat would be awesome.

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 1:29 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

I rather enjoyed this seeing genuine conflict and remorse rather than 'I'm big so I'll kill you all lolz.' Don't know if you'll continue it but I'd be happy to read more.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 8:25 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual

I'm not a vore guy in the least bit, but I think this was very experimental and well written. I don't think I'll continue reading, but I thought it was really good anyway.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 10:28 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

I find it odd that this kind of story isn't written about more often...I really doubt that EVERY woman would turn into a sadistic, cruel monster if turned into a giantess. This kind of giantess is something I haven't really seen on this site.

Either the giantess loves killing and eating people or she's a saint. The giantess in this story is probably the closest to how MOST decent people would act in that position: "I need to eat to survive I'm not gonna just go around crushing and killing for no good reason either."

I'm really enjoying this so far!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 9:29 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

You know, this is good enough to continue. I am really curious to learn more about this giantess.

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