I like it.  I like it very much.

  I actually enjoyed this story, good one for your first try and if there is a sequel, I'd love to read it!

I have a few things to add, some good, some are more like what I think could be improved but understand that no matter what I type next, I still like this story enough to read its sequel from start to finish. 

Good:

-I feel Jessica's pain, the dilemma she felt as she struggled between eating to survive and her moral compass telling her to stop, I really sympathised with her,

-Dustin's own problems I could feel as well, from running away to having to face Jessica when he has been cheating on her. Would she eat him upon learning of his betrayal or would she forgive him? Really kept me guessing.

-Not letting this degenerate into a huge orgy where Jessica pleasures herself using people and the city, we got enough of that now. 

Room for Improvement:

-Michael felt underdeveloped, he could have had more time, to flesh him out and he felt isolated at times when it seemed he would be better off with someone to interact with. 

-I think you could be more descriptive with the actions, it is good you got into the heads of our characters but when it comes to their actions, like perhaps when Jessica is eating people, to really get the punch needed you could have dedicated more words to her actions.

-Pacing felt rushed towards the end but I tend to enjoy a story that builds up slowly so this might not be a valid point, bit iffy on this one. 

 That's really all I've got, hope to see something soon!

Dustin sure lives dangerously.

The prison was a great idea, and the teeth to separate the cuffed men. The by play between Dustin and Jessica is now the hilight of the story. I rarely subscribe to a story as a favorite, just browse most recent, but this one has me rivetted.

The relationship would sure have an interesting dynamic.

This was phenomenally graphic in its description, not just of the eating, but of the thoughts that went through the giantess's mind while leading up to it, and while doing it. Are you into vore yourself, or just writing it for the readers' to fantasize?

Here's something I put on another site, which might change your outlook on one thing you said in this chapter, for the best, I hope. 

https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3036038/1/The-Prayer-Necessities

I loved this line: "I even stuck out my tongue and let him enjoy the view"

Love to chat any time too.

peterthewryter@gmail.com 

Excellent chapter, never would have thought that Justin being honest about his infidelity could result in anything other than his death and instead it might just have save the world.

Really given her personality being in flux almost anything could happen next chapter should she survive, and there's the very real possibility she didn't. Either way looking forward to seeing how this ends.

Spectacular chapter. I'm looking forward to see what we will see next. Would be neat if she somehow finds Melissa and knows who she is and what she did. I think that would make for an interesting situation considering she's changed(which I'm assuming she has). Wonder what will happen if the bomb has no effect on her? Will that trigger her bloodlust once again? I'm looking forward to the last chapter(kinda sad ita ending) but I wish she could somehow reunite with either her parents or Dustin's.

aaron
PS nice touch not having her kill Dustin. I like this human Jessica.

Think she'll still die, quite a rollercoaster chapter and honestly, fits Jessica's current personality. It's too late, saving one tunnnel of people won't undo the damage she has done and frankly, unless Michael and Dustin can convince the commander to hold off the missile.

Dustin will probably die if he isn't running for his life now. 

Shes practically become an egomaniac with a goddess complex like gts on this site...Hopefully some of the good in her comes back and fights because at this point im just waiting till she gets nuked.