Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

When I first saw the story I was concerned at the length of the chapter, although after reading it, I feel it works fine as a one shot (if you intend to add more than maybe you should consider splitting the chapter into more managable chunks). I don't usually like insertion stories, but the title had me interested and I do like gentle stories. The summary was rather lacking I felt and it doesn't do your story justice so you should add more detail to it.