Reviewer: Moonpie Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

So ash will have three guardians,  very interesting. So will we get to see how other males are treated in this story? It seems like ash got luck to have regan and addi because they allow him more "freedom" than that of the typical male. You're leaving for a whole week!? I dont know if i can last that long! Haha good story

Author's Response:

Males are rare and guarded, but I imagine we'll see others at some point. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: greaterthan3 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

Uhg cliffhangers, please don't let us have to wait too long! Really liked how this chapter was written, its almost like having to explain your fetish to someone.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm going to try to write the next chapter tomorrow, before I go on vacation for a week. We'll see what happens.

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

It seems by your description in chapter 1, that ascension is a choice and purely natural.  My guess is that Luna has always suffered from health problems and she'll probably have to ascend to save her life.  That's going to be tough for Ash.  He seems to find some comfort in Luna being the same size as him and he doesn't like being treated as less then an equal.  Luna seems so sweet and innocent, but I wonder how much of that is because she seems a bit . . . slow.  I wonder how much of that sweetness she'll lose by ascending.  I forsee some marital problems lurking.

Author's Response:

Interesting thoughts. Thanks!

Reviewer: dzaza Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2014 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

interesting

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this story so far. Keep it up

Author's Response:

Will do! Thanks!!

Reviewer: MrSirk Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

With a title like Luna's Ascension it's not hard to figure out what's going to happen here. I just hope it doesn't ruin the couple.

I'm not a huge fan of Ash's attitude but I can't blame him for it. The traditional identity of a man is obviously really important to him and he lives in a society where that's practically irrelevent. Half of me wants to say hey you're an adult get over it yet the other half is like keep fighting the good fight. So kudos for creating a character like that. 

Luna's the best at everything always. :) I also think Regan might have a slight crush on her. 

Author's Response:

Ash apparently studies history, learning what he can from the pre-Ascension era. He seems to have trouble reconciling what he's learned (independence of man, etc) with his upbringing and societal expectations. Then again, he's obedient in other situations, perhaps force of habit. I think there's a difference between a man who's magically transported into a world like that (other stories come to mind), and a man born and raised in such a world.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ash seems like a child here, is that your intent? I can't fault him for that, he is treated like one when he's outside, men must be a real valuable commodity if fears of being kidnapped are so widespread. 

Author's Response:

Yep. In some ways, we get the impression he's been treated like a child his entire life. He has guardians, he doesn't get to keep most of the money he earns, he's not allowed to drive many places, and women are frequently condescending. He's grown up in a very different world. He and Luna remind me a bit of Titan pets that grew up on Titan planets. Can't seem to remember their names, but I'm thinking of the guy that punched Luke and the girl (Nonah?) before Niall trained her. Wow, I really need to read Titan again, lol.

Reviewer: greaterthan3 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love the divinity world/universe it plays into the fetish so well but constantly reminds you its a fantacy. You'd go crazy living in a world like that but its so addicting to read about. That subtle dominance in every aspect of life is so hot. Like the scene with the weights in chapter 1.

 

Also hopefully this story will live up to its R rating, its been faaaar too long since we've had a well written mini-giantess story with some good sexy sceens.  And the title of the story implys Luna will become a define.. So hopefully she won't smother ash. And would this may be be a 4-way? Either mFFF or mfFF? Either one would be fun to read... Plus the way you write Luna is she's already stunning without divinity, with it shed be a bombshell by amazon standards.  I love giant curvy women....

 

 

Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Well, it may get an X rating at some point, we'll see. I'm a discovery writer so when stuff happens, I write it.

Also, the specifics of Ascension haven't been explained yet. We know Ascended are significantly larger and heal differently, but I wouldn't go so far as calling them 'divine'. At least not based on what we know so far.

Thanks for the review. It's extremely encouraging!

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

They seem like a cute family. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Coming soon. Thanks for the review!