Date: September 19 2014 10:26 PM Title: Spell 3 - The Trigger
Well it certainly helped her, although Thayna will need to learn to control the magic within her, she now has access to more mana than she can manage!
Author's Response:
Hey Nostory :) Thayna's got her work cut out for her with her new power, but at least she's not the lowest pole on the totem any more!
Incidentally, I was reading your bio, and I happen to be from the same country as you! Small world :>
[Report This]Date: September 19 2014 9:28 PM Title: Spell 3 - The Trigger
dammit no joke like near the start of the ch. i figured out the her sorce to her magic mark would be something like love,arousal,or like passion for her feet. good ch.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I figured it'd make for some interesting interactions if Thayna's mark were to be based on arousal, especially if John wasn't there to feed her :) We'll see what trouble they get into
[Report This]Date: September 19 2014 7:52 PM Title: Spell 3 - The Trigger
A very good chapter! I had a feeling sexual arousal would be Thayna's trigger. I'm really enjoying this story. I would like to see some other giantesses besides the Fire family. And maybe learn a little bit more about Farum. Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response:
Thanks Shrunken Scholar :) I've planned for this story to be an adventure, so John and Thayna will be on their way to explore the world soon! We'll see what they find in their journeys~
[Report This]Date: September 16 2014 5:31 AM Title: Spell 2 - The Fire Sisters
John is a really good character himself, but I didn't expect the Sisters to have so much depth to them. I approve this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! It was fun to write for so many dfferent personalities at once :) Glad it worked out!
[Report This]Date: September 16 2014 3:17 AM Title: Spell 2 - The Fire Sisters
Interesting dynamics between the sisters, John is in for a real handful now that he's met all of them.
Author's Response:
He's in for some rough times ahead :)
Date: September 15 2014 5:36 AM Title: Spell 1 - A Whimsical Meeting
Nice job so far. I like giantess stories in a fantasy setting. But you said Tharsia caught several people under her foot. If she's fifty feet tall than according to the Giantess converter, her foot would be 7.4 feet long and 2.6 feet wide. So how could she catch several people underfoot? Unless she did it one at a time.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :) The villagers were huddled together closely, so Tharsia could easily catch a few of them at once!
[Report This]Date: September 14 2014 11:56 AM Title: Spell 1 - A Whimsical Meeting
I like this. It seems really fun and interesting. I'll definitely be following this one.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! It was fun to write for too, please look forward to it!
[Report This]Date: September 14 2014 7:50 AM Title: Spell 1 - A Whimsical Meeting
Seems fun and I like what you've done here, can't wait to see what else you've got planned! Thayna seems to be gentle but mischievous enough to make you fear for your own safety.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I was having trouble wiritng for Madison in GDD, what with how stiff she can be sometimes, so I throught I'd write a feisty, mischievous girl like Thayna. Should be fun :)