Date: September 06 2014 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was a really great story! Gosh, being kept in a pendant around the neck is, like, one of my ultimate kinks. It was so cruel and evil and Daniel being made to live through that for eternity is wonderful. Thanks so much for posting this!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Tinyone234! I love the heck out of your stories, so I’m pleased to know that you liked this one.
Date: September 04 2014 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good on you for posting here! As you may have guessed, I read this story at the 'City and fell in love with couple; not to mention Daniel's final size and prison at the end. A lot of people love your story, I really hope this encourages you to write more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Gadget! I’m flattered that you like the story. I hope to write a lot more, especially since the giant couple genre doesn’t have as many writers as the giantess one. I’m slowly working up the courage to post more. =)
Date: September 04 2014 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really loved it! A very hot pair of demons. Especially how dismissive they were of the tiny humans. Some cruel and wonderfully vivid erotic violence. I felt the descriptions here were very clear all around, particularly in regard to Liana and Mason. And love that she chained Daniel to her ankle when he tried to get away!
Daniel made for an interesting observer for the two. He's kind of a gray character, not black or white, in how he did this to himself, and earned his place through jealousy and what was probably a terrible deed. One feels sorry for him, and doesn't. A peculiar person to ponder. :)
Author's Response:
I must say that you have such thoughtful reviews and I’m always pleased that you manage to catch the more subtle elements that I slip into stories. I tried to make Daniel a morally ambiguous character, someone who is susceptible to things like cowardice and envy and anger. I’m fond of “gray” characters in stories, although I usually identify with the giant people (not a surprise there, I guess.)
And I just had to write in the ankle chain…it’s one of those images that’s been haunting me recently. =)
Date: September 03 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the story~ Great introduction, good build up, surprising twists and great fetish content. Very well done.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I’m glad that you enjoyed it =)
Date: September 03 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, hello there. :)
Author's Response:
Yep, I decided to post this story here as well! =)