Date: August 29 2014 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing start so far! Im really interested in this world where humans can control and enslave beings of that size and strength!
Author's Response:
Yep, it's a twist that interests me. Thanks for the comment, gadget!
Date: August 29 2014 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm liking this story already!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: August 29 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad to see you writing again- you are talented.
I'm a bit of a fan of seeing the Giantess somehow being made to have a lower position than the regular people. It's kinda what drove my own "Of A Construct" before my forced hiatus.
What happened to all your older writing, by the way?
Author's Response:
Thank you! I removed my older writing because I wanted to rewrite it without the X-rated material. Then I realized I enjoy writing new stories far more than rewrites. Lol. You can still download my old story from archive: tinyurl.com/npbfgzu
[Report This]Date: August 28 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Gotta say, I really like this. Has a great deal of potential for character growth in all the major characters. It's also a fairly interesting concept.
What do the Fyth look like? Do they just look like very large humans, or do they have any interesting characteristics?
Author's Response:
Thanks! Since it's a first person story, we don't get a good image of Alani's appearance. However we know she's considered a 'female' based on the auctioneer's description, pronouns and other things. We also know that Lyric considered her as potentially 'pretty'. Then again, some people use that word to describe all types of things. There will be more description in the next chapter.
Date: August 28 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I forgot this part but why would Alani allow herself to be abused? I'm curious to know why the larger being would allow this but maybe you'll reveal it along the way.
I actually do like these scenarios as it makes ever so complex, it's too easy for the giantess to just get mad and step on the smaller being.
Author's Response:
Good question. The answer hasn't been revealed yet. Perhaps it has something to do with her food supply. Then again, she could just steal the food by force. Whatever the reason, she doesn't appear interested in revolting, though we don't know if that's a personality trait of her, or of her race in general.
[Report This]Date: August 28 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, yes , yes, oh yes! It's so good to see you back here again!
I already feel compelled to learn more about Alani, she seems nervous and kind of beaten down and I am curious to know about the Fyth, an alien race? Serus Prime sounds like another planet so either a race enslaved or one that engages in the slave trade.
Kenji seems like a boy forced to become a man, he doesn't seem to know how to behave like one and it showed at the auction, he probably bought Alani thanks to her low pricing, nothing else. He mentioned a father that did nothing about his heart problems until it was too late and I'm sensing his mother bit the dust early in his life so now its just Lyric and him.
You have me hooked, can't wait for more. If it's anything like your last I'll be a huge fan.
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks Nostory! Alani does seem a bit un-giantesslike, except for her size of course. I thought it would be fun to have a world where the larger beings served the smaller. The Fyth are a bioengineered species, entirely female based on the conversation thus far (between Alani and Lyric).