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Reviewer: Tina Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Exhilarating !
Your story is pure, unashamed fun.
You clearly had a lot of fun writing this one, and it shows !
I shared that pleasure as the pathetic ian serves as a fragile
punching ball to his relentless tormentor.
As you said : lots of cliches. But cliches worth every second
of my breathless, uninterrupted read.

Thanks for sharing your work

Tina~ 

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great twist! I wasn't expecting that at all, even as I was trying to figure out what was going on. And I like that the method isn't clearly explained, either. It's just something that can get as wild as it needs to, indefinitely. I really liked the imagination of Sarah Catherine's various tortures, as well as the expressions of the little guy's realizations and reactions.



Author's Response:

I've found that a lot of stories get stuck on trying to explain the how, when for the most part the audiences we're writing for are going to be like "okay, the shrinking happens." I wrote this one in the "Post Message" box at Giantess City and it turned out to be one of my favorites. I should definitely continue it at some point. I had some more wicked ideas. Well, Sarah Catherine did anyway.

Reviewer: Rythmear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

The ability to invade someone's dreams?

 

Oh this has a -lot- of potential. I love it!

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