Such a fascinating premise, the correlation of wealth and very physical worth and potence. Staring on such a small scale, too, watching someone relinquish most of their power just to fuck around with the peons. You really evoked great emotion with Joe's desperation, his paltry aspirations, so easily quashed by a power-monger to whom cruelty is only a few minutes' entertainment. This was an emotionally laden piece.

EmmaGear, you've penned another fantastic addition to your catalogue of sexy giantess stories. Obnoxiously, you've set the bar quite high for ETZ's contest, but that's expected. It's a given that your writing is dynamic and vivid, etc. What I liked in particular is how downright snooty the antagonist of the story is. She just oozes that terrible bitchiness that, for many of us, is somehow attractive. You did a fantastic job of capturing that, and it makes the story so much sexier than your typical rampaging giantess.

My only gripe is that I felt the big reveal might have been a bit too obvious. This is obviously just an opinion, so take it all with a cup of salt or whatever, but perhaps you could've built up the tension a bit more towards the end of Anatta's torture session. Maybe the other tenants of that slum could have plucked up the courage to try to save the boy. They could've ganged up on her in such a way that even her size wasn't enough. For a brief flicker, it could appear as though the evil giantess would be overcome, but of course you could dash those hopes to the ground by having her enlarge yet further and with a maliciously amused smirk, this all-powerful woman could expose just how pathetic the little urchins were to her. As it is now, I worry that Anatta's domination of the little boy is perhaps a little too inevitable and makes for a less captivating story (although of course still very sexy).

Either way, I greatly enjoyed the story. You were even teetering ever so slightly into the "Odor" tag for a couple lines there, which of course I can't get enough of. (You did it for me, right?) If it gets you to put out more GTS stories, here's hoping people have more contests.

A sweet read! The way it ends left a very cool image in my mind. I love Anatta's character. She's completely unconcerned with who she hurts, no matter who they are, it seems. A sadist out for her own pleasure. And she kicked off her shoes early - haha, a trademark of yours I really love. It's like a sign that shit's about to get real. Especially loved those hard kicks to the head!

Hot character, hot violence. Really enjoyed the read.