[Report This]Date: March 16 2019 5:07 AM Title: Getting This Parted Started
Wow!
Wow!
Loved that story from begining to end! As far as I can remember, I already did read this story before, and maybe some of its sequels (not completely), but now that I'm registered, I simply MUST leave a review, and thanks for such a great stoy!
[Report This]Date: September 07 2014 12:37 PM Title: One Last Snack...
Fantastic story. It's great seeing such a talented author writing out unaware stories including micro and vore, they are really rare to find these days, sadly. And you did such a great job. The last chapter even was the best for me, I loved the idea of Kelsey getting "a taste" of her own medicine and joining the party too on a one way trip ;) I am a big fan of irony and sarcasm which just fits well in unaware, and I loved parts like these a lot: "The cup finally arrived at face level. “I sure hope this helps my tummyache,” Lexi said, looking down at her stuffed gut. “Well,” she continued, closing her eyes and tilting her head back, “only one way to find out.” and “Kelsey joined the party in Alexis’s tummy,” he said." or "An extremely loud burp escaped from Lexi’s mouth as she finished off the last of the ginger ale. Tommy shivered in fear, having listened to the sound of the fluid entering the teenager’s stomach.". If you write again I hope youll use plenty of these irony and sarcasm too again. Hope youll write lots of future stories, youre a great author.
Author's Response: I'm glad you got all the irony and really enjoyed it. It's kinda funny, I was just questioning my own abilities as a writer when I logged on and read this, so this just made my day! The new murder mystery story will have its first chapter up Friday afternoon (or evening if your on eastern time), and I look forward to hearing your feedback on it.
[Report This]Date: September 07 2014 12:29 PM Title: One Last Snack...
Loved the story. You have a great way of describing vore
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm a big vore fan so I wanted to go into more detail with those scenes on this story than on my last one.
Date: September 07 2014 8:52 AM Title: One Last Snack...
Kelsey is dead?!nooooo!Why you killed her,snif:(
It was a nice work but i don't like the sad end for my dear kelsey,snif,snif:((you were too cruel for her!
Highly your new story!See you!
Author's Response:
Well, she did kinda deserve it, committing cannibalism and murder and all but look at it this way at least Tommy gets to have happy-ish ending! I noticed that on this website the giantesses always seem to win so I figured I would change it up sometimes.
glad you liked the story and I'll make sure to have the new one up soon. :)
[Report This]Date: September 06 2014 7:30 PM Title: One Last Snack...
Great story!your vore stori is great,i love vore and you become my favorit author in that category and continue your story!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it! I'll try to have the first chapter of the new story up sometime before next weekend and it will be a direct continuation of this one, but feel free to check out my original story Not-So-Happy Meals too since it is all part of the same universe :)
[Report This]Date: August 30 2014 1:34 PM Title: Just Desserts
I Love the new chapter!Too bad there is a conclusion;(
and for our dear Kelsey''Bon Appetit'';)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Don't worry about the conclusion, as I'll be making a sequel soon. It's all part of my larger Voreverse series.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2014 8:09 AM Title: Just Desserts
I liked how u had the boyfriend get eaten by his girlfriend. Then they went off for fun.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! I had been looking forward to writing that part for awhile!
Date: August 23 2014 2:27 PM Title: Getting This Parted Started
Three pizzas!? Jeez... Even at my peek eating capability as a teen, I could only finish one. Those three guys are likely to be smothered to death before digestion hits them.
Author's Response: Yeah, that's totally what happens to Mike inside Emma's tummy. Hard to tell whats worse, being buried alive in chewed food or being digested. Or both.
Date: August 18 2014 11:38 PM Title: Getting This Parted Started
Great so far! Can't wait for more :3
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm planning on having a new chapter out every weekend. Check back on Saturday!
[Report This]Date: August 17 2014 4:13 PM Title: Getting This Parted Started
I like it,i cant wait for the next chapter;)
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it! The next chapter should be up next Saturday and the last two chapters will come in the following weeks after that.