[Report This]Date: August 17 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
been thinking about the facebook idea. The photos would need to show the relative size. A photo of a man shrunken would look the same as him at normal size ... except for whatever's in the background of the shot.
Author's Response: Yep, hence why he stands next to Brian and later Mary. Certainly need something to show scale. Some of Matts photos are meant to be obvious and some more subtle in this regard.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
So Mary (THE WOMAN) has the fantasy. Wow! Read on, timescribe, read on.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
"Feeling a bit small at the moment."
Hahahhah
[Report This]Date: August 17 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
Quantum Physics with a Bosun Ray does sound like a good way to get these guys into the realm of a relative giantess
[Report This]Date: August 17 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
by the way, my email address is peterthewriter@yahoo.com.au.
I liked your reviews of Captain Miniature. And yes, the Prime Minister of Australia in the Captain Miniature storyline is a composite of John Liehard and Phony Abbott.
Happy to chat more,
Peter
[Report This]Date: August 17 2014 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
All I can say is "Wow"
[Report This]Date: August 16 2014 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
At last, we're getting to the good stuff! :-)
*Rubs hands with anticipatory glee*
[Report This]Date: August 16 2014 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Actually, "action figure" was a euphemism coined for the original, one foot-tall G.I. JOE of the 1960's. Since, it was "sissy stuff" for boys to play with dolls. So, "doll" and "action figure" are basically synonymous.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2014 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
@lc725: How could the waitress get away with it? A chloroformed handkerchief over Mary's mouth? In full view of the other two guys plus the rest of the dining public? Not even Matt is that self-absorbed!*
*Sorry, DG. I tend to get long-winded when I become emotionally over-involved in a giantess story.
Author's Response:
Love it...
[Report This]Date: August 15 2014 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Carycomic, they haven't left the restaurant yet...
I'm hoping he loses the lycra soon....
[Report This]Date: August 15 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
Together, at last!
I just wish I could give you a hundred extra stars just for avoiding the cliche' of abduction-by-horny waitress.
Author's Response: Nah, the waitress isn't into little guys.
Date: August 14 2014 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi all.
Thanks for the reviews. Yeah, it's a bit longer than I had initially anticipated to get Scott and Mary together... Those dot points turned into more text than I thought.
They should be heading off for some quality time at the end of Chapter 6.
Author's Response: I choose to amend my previous statement. They should have some alone time by the end of Chapter 7. At least now they're in the same location.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2014 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
Is he up for it? That's like asking if Fort Knox is up for receiving more gold!!!
[Report This]Date: August 14 2014 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great build-up! I'm now off to chapter five.
Date: August 14 2014 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
Its a nice, but slow start. The presence of "giants" makes me cringe, but hopefully his rendevous with Mary will make it all worth it. She looks like she might be a sweet, fun,and playful giantess. I look forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2014 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
I like the premise a lot and the writing flows very nicely, just hoping to see some GTS interaction in the upcoming chapters instead of just the guys. I love the slow shrinking in stages, hope there's a lot more of that.
It's a good thing Scott's cool with being tiny and Mary likes it that way too, very excited to see where this goes. I'm picturing her 50 feet tall in a bikini at the park while a very tiny Scott gets photographed biking around on her like a landscape.
Author's Response: Oh, now that idea dovetails nicely with another I had in mind... I think that might make a sequel to this story, rather than a part of this one. Otherwise we might never find an end.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
OK, then. Next stop: cheerleading practice area.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2014 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
First stop: cheerleading practice area?
[Report This]Date: August 12 2014 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Was that a Freudian slip in the misspelling of Brian's name? Or is that what Scott and Matt have actually nicknamed him, in-story, for his polytechnical expertise?
Author's Response:
Hamfisted typo, really. Fixed now, thanks.