Reviews For Boson Ray
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Reviewer: Tiny Steve Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2019 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story very much !

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not sure actually. The size sub genres were redefined a few months ago. I'm still learnign the new ones.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 16

Adel? As in, the waitress who's not into little guys?! Hoo-boy! What a way to get her wish.

Author's Response: Yep. And Scott should probably stop thinking about how long this could last too. :-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 16

Now I can see how this leads into the other story I reviewed.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

This is actually my first foray into the Micro sub genre I think.



Author's Response: Micro is less than an inch, isn't it. He's not there. Yet. Remaining pretty firmly metric here, because that's how I think. Though I have become reasonably proficient at converting in my head.

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

I've enjoyed this story!  Based on its description, I'm uncomfortable about the sequel.  I avoid stories about giants like the plague.  I'm concerned that if I pass on it,  I won't know if and when you go back to Scott and Mary unless that gets its own seperate sequel.  But I give this story high marks!



Author's Response: To be clear: Boson Ray 2 will finish at the same point as this story, and the third installment will pick up where this one (and that one) finish. It will be possible to skip number 2 entirely. I'm aiming to re-hash the key character points from part 2 into part 3, after all Scott and Mary don't know what went on yet either.

Reviewer: The Lurkmeister Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

I think you mean "coitus" but it autocorrected to something very different. But seriously awesome chapter. Your descriptions are excellent.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

Called it ;)



Author's Response: But how close are you in the details? ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 15

Normal life is over-rated, Mary.

;-D

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

It was NOT Drummer Hoff that fired her off!*

*Sorry; I was reminded of an old nursery rhyme for some reason.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 13

I'm hoping, for Brian's sake, that the waitress only wants to persuade him into using the boson ray on her _own_ boyfriend.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

I see where this thing with the waitress is going...

Well Scott, I hope you're prepared for an extended stay at that size.



Author's Response: I think you're on the right track, but I guess we shall see.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really love this story. Despite how little coverage it gets in this community, I find gentle stuff to be the most fun.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2014 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 12

Scott must REALLY be a video-holic, if he's actually struggling to stay awake and watch TV from such a warm and comfy spot. LOL!

Author's Response: I know people who just *have* to watch screens that are in front of them...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 11

I salivate in anticipation of the next brilliantly erotic chapter. ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

A-ha! Revenge for all the shrinkies who were ever lathered up against their will.*

I loved it. :-D

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 9

Ah, yes! The shower to restore power.

Author's Response: A bath, maybe? ;-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

Ah yes, between the cleavage, another of my fantasies coming out in this story. No doubt this girl is one of yours too.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

And that last question has me aching to get to chapter 8 too.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

"He spread his arms across the skin above her upper lip in the biggest embrace he could manage, while planting a kiss under her nose. She kissed his whole torso with a small twitch. "

THIS IS SO WELL WRITTEN, THAT I WISH IT WAS HAPPENING TO ME.



Author's Response: Thank you. That's probably the highest compliment you could give.

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