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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2014 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Ides of March

Interesting first chapter. I'll review as I read on but I like the way things are set up here. I think the way you play with time as the story switches from time period to time period kind of makes things a little confusing but I'll get used to it.



Author's Response:

The first part of chapter one is foreshadowing for a future scene, it gives the reader a hint at what is going to happen. The detaills of Julius Marius's life occurs before the Ides of March as they build up to Caesar's death. 

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Fight

This is shaping up nicely. And is she a fan or a groupie lol. I'm having a blast reading this. Makes me want to watch gladiator again.

aaron

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Aaron. She may become a groupie you never know. Julius is kind of based on Maximus from gladiator. I want him to be a moral soldier like Maximus.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 2: Capua

I like what I see so far but maybe you could use the end notes as a glossary to translate the Latin words?



Author's Response: Ok will do. Thanks!

Reviewer: redfiredog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Ides of March

An excellent first chapter to an entertaining and enormously promising story. The writing is top-notch, the world is all too believable, and the attention to historical detail is impressive. I'm looking forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

Thanks I appreciate itr. Chapter 2 is already uploaded, and 3 is in the early stages.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Ides of March

What a great idea for a story. Would have rather read a story about Cleopatra and Mark Antony. But this story is spectacular and I have no complaints. I can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron
PS love how the beginning was kinda like Gladiator'.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I always kinda wanted to do a GTS story with a gladiator. I thought it would be cool re-write history where Caesar was instead killed by his wife instead of Brutus. 

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