[Report This]Date: November 18 2014 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.
Love this story, hope you continue it some time.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 10: Stuck Between a Wet and Soft Place and a Wet and Soft Place.
Wow!
A great chapter!
Where do they go from here?
[Report This]Date: September 01 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 10: Stuck Between a Wet and Soft Place and a Wet and Soft Place.
Fantastic long chapter, but I was kinda confused sometimes when Jessica and Nina were talking. I couldn't tell who was who.
At the end of this chapter, Brad is stuck in whose ass? Nina looks up at Jessica and says 'oh I see'
so is Nina watching Brad go in Jessica's ass or is Nina moving Brad under Nina's ass? Perhaps less pronouns and more of their names.
I kinda forgot about Rick. This chapter was so sexy that I didn't think of him.
Wrapping Rick up with tape like a mummy is my suggestion and I'm glad you like it. Rick can be mummified and then inserted into Nina's ass or pussy.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Brad was under Nina when he got smaller so he wound up under her ass and she felt him down there small enough to be inserted iso she said "Oh I see." Jessica grabbed them both and walked to the couch. So they are both in her hand atm.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2014 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 9: Between a soft place and a soft place.
Wow, what a creative chapter!
Two sets of lips from different women, and different places. Ass lips, and mouth lips. I love it!
As for Rick, its gotta be inside the ass of Nina. Tape him up until he looks like a mummy. Have two little slits so he can see his fate. Jessica then puts Rick in her mouth then she puts Rick in Nina's ass.
Its a bit of a stretch , but hopefully this idea brings up other ideas that you will use next chapter. I cant wait!
Author's Response:
I actually love the idea, it may get used or someting like it.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2014 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.
I want rick to die between the two asses of the police woman and our witch!! But farts are what kill him... Not enough oxygen between two asses!! Haha... Anyhow that's my vote on how I would have him killed!!
Date: August 14 2014 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.
The whole story started right at the event of Jesscia shrinking her husband. So we dont really know how she behaved before. She could have abused others but her husband for quite a while already behave she shrank him.
Date: August 14 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.
I agree with riczar. This story has taken a turn for the dark. Where is this psychotic behavior coming from? Kidnapping, torture, home invasion, rape?
I say you not kill Rick, but have him be injured severely. Enough so that it shocks Jessica into realizing what the hell she's doing.
Date: August 14 2014 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 9: Between a soft place and a soft place.
Though not a ray of sunshine by any means, this story has certainly turned dark. I feel like this is going from something to help spice up and renew their marriage to her becoming a psychotic monster. You're walking a fine line at the moment. Much darker and it will turn me off this story. I'll be cautiously reading your future chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feeedback.I have made it obvious that it may effect what I release, and yours may do so, I don't enjoy the extreme violence when I read it either, and I consider what is happening with Rick violent yes, but extreme or a turn off to my tastes.
I understand that this story has morphed into something different than what it started as. Partly that is because I had no idea what I wanted it to initally be aside from a concept.
I also did not expect it to be this long and it may have benefitted from completing and a sequel coming of it that led to hear.
I am writing what comes to me. I will likely be ending this series of chapters soon and writing a sequel that caters towards what I have learned I enjoy writing through writing this.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.
What about Jessica commands Nina to put Rick in Nina´s ass or just sit on him till he is turned to pulp ^^ Being humlitated by another dominated one would bring Rick even a step lower in the "ranking" ^^
Oh and btw i LOVE this story, butt action supreme :)
[Report This]Date: August 13 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.
man i was really hoping to see some giant/giantess action. :/
[Report This]Date: August 10 2014 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 8: Ride Him Cowgirl Part 2!
Wow, I love that ass play!
I feel like the cop should take Rick home. How?
Well Jessica could shrink the cop, and then have the tiny cop handcuff Rick. Jessica then makes a deal with the cop to have a threesome.
Jessica then enlarges the cop for the threesome with Rick, all while Brad is stuck in Jessica's ass. Jessica then puts Rick in her vagina and the cop uses a strapon to push Brad further inside Jessica's ass, and Rick futher inside Jessica's vagina.
Jessica then orgasm, and Rick slides out of her vagina. Brad is still stuck in Jessica's ass. Jessica takes the handcuffed Rick, and hands him to the cop and she sticks Rick into her vagina.
The cop leaves and Jessica goes to sleep with Brad still in her ass.
Thats my idea. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I am glad to hear you like the story so much.
Unforrtunately I doubt your idea will amke it in fully, but I may use some of it, I am sorry but I want to relay how much she still loves Brad and while she may stray I don't feel like her power trip will get so big that she'd cheat on her husband.
I havea a vision of how I want her to evolve now, that I think a lot of you readers will enjoy.
But by all means keep reding, reviewing and giving me your input, it would not be the first time I worked feedback into my writing.
Date: August 08 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 7: Ride Him Cowgirl!
This is what he gets for being a dumbass and not growing back to normal when he had the chance! Now, its unlikely he'll ever get another chance with his wife the way she is...
[Report This]Date: August 07 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
Liking the story so far, you're doing a great job! :)
Would definetly cast my vote for her butt, but that's just my preference :P
Keep at it, you're doing great so far :D
[Report This]Date: August 07 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.
This is an amazing story. The characters are great, and you describe the sexual situations amazingly. I know I'm late to the party, but I vote for option 3 as well. Finally, sequels with the setup you have here is pretty easy. Jessica can just grow and shrink Brad at her pleasure.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
Make him tap three times for her ass crack.
I am loving this story alot and i hope you finish this.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am not entirely sure if this story will ever truly end. I have so many thoughts and ideas I want to explore. It is possible this specific story may conclude but there will be sequels as long as I can write, you guys will have me and I can fantasize.
So far the butt is winning.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
Wow, I just all six chapters and you amazed me.
Jessica and Brad kept in character and didnt have any surprising behaviour. I like how I can easily understand the motives for each person which makes this story that much easier to read.
I also love the tone you gave Jessica. Especially when she says "he is staying small forever" or "we are going to have some fun". I dont know, I guess I like it when a sexy woman says stuff like that to a tiny man's horror.
I like the continous action. Panties, bra, mouthplay, feet, ass, and now where to carry him.
My vote is for the front of the panties. Second choice is back of panties, 3rd is bra, and fourth is feet.
Now the reason why I want the front of the panties is becuase I love insertion and when a giantesss gains pleasure. Of course, she gains pleasure from all those places, but I believe she gains pleasure most from the front of the panties.
I see alot of people love ass, including me. I was thinking, maybe Jessica will put Brad in the front of her panties, then he slides to the back of the panties later on. Then he slides back to the front of the panties near the end of the trip.
I love the diversity of all the things that Brad is going through, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you Tom, Jessica is the type of giantess I would choose for my self if the chance ever arose. When I started writing this story it was on a whim, I have read many and looked at pictures for years but I decided to toss my hat into this community officially.
I have never wrote a story before but have paragraph rped for years so decided I would take a writing style I am used too and put it to paper. That's why there is so much back and forth flow it is similar to reading two people paragraph rp, im glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
I like how the story's progressing. This chapter had a nice variety of different body parts, a little something for everyone. I vote for him to spend some time in the back of her panties. maybe he means to tap four times, but she only feels three?
Author's Response:
Thank you Mr E. You are one of the artists I liked forward to sing new content from, I'm glad your enjoying this and I cab give back in my own way.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.
I vote for the back of her panties!!! More ass action!! The butt is one of the best parts of the giantess!!! Please be the booty!!!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
love the ch. my vote is for him to spend more time with her feet.
Date: August 05 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.
Incredible story! You did a wonderful job with the shower! My vote is definitely the ass. He needs to get hugged by her butt cheeks!