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Reviewer: Durly Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2014 8:27 AM Title: Half the man I am now.

Hey great story so far! Maybe try to add more dialogue in and make your chaoters longer with greater detail.Really liking the setting of this story so far keep it up.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review it really helps me improve my stories and get better marks

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