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Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well, this made religion a lot sexier. I love how it's written, but I wonder how you were intending the serpent imagery to be taken. If it's supposed to be subtle, you should work on it, but if it's supposed to be a clear comparison between the serpent and Mary, then it was well done.

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