Date: May 18 2015 1:07 PM Title: Demolition Girl
Great chapter! I'm surprised that Jessica was pushed so far near death early in the story like this! And now she's evolved to be more powerful than before...I'm awaiting the next chapter, it seems like things are starting to head in another direction from the original story!
Author's Response:
Well I did promise my readers that the story and series as a whole would go in a different direction than the original. Things will be interesting from here on out, the differences will be much clearer now but Zoltan showing up so early should have been a sign of the deviations I made :)
Yeah I retained that evolution thing from the original but I threw the growth spurt in, last time it wasn't there because she was already 300 feet tall, she didn't need to grow any bigger. Not only powerful but she retains her sexiness as well, the world better watch out!
Date: May 11 2015 12:26 AM Title: Decisions
Great Chapter! Not my favorite chapter since there wasnt much GTS content but it was interesting to see characters like Zoltan and Lauren interacting this early in the story!
I'm glad you started updating your stories again, I'm eagerly awaiting the Downtrodden update, not to sound biased but thats my favorite of your stories so far...
Author's Response:
I'll try to avoid having too many non-GTS content in my stories but it'll probably happen from time to time, to give lesser characters their time under the spotlight.
I had exams, kept me away but now I'm back so I will be happy to sate your need for my stories.
I'm cool with it, not every story I write will get the same reception as Downtrodden. Its fine, just up to me to finish it.
Date: May 10 2015 10:36 PM Title: Decisions
I remember North Korea's performance in the World Cup. After that, coming back home must have been a nightmare.
I sent you an email, a new thread. Not sure if you received it.
Author's Response:
I don't really know about the North Korea thing in real life, too much mystery over there but I could buy the more unsavoury ones.
Try sending it again, I got nothing.
Date: January 20 2015 2:34 PM Title: Questions
Is Jack EVER going to wise up and not be a pretentious scumbag? Fuck, I'd be grateful they didn't kill me or force-feed me some amnesiac drug... Dude, they gave you a mattress, it's better than if they had decided to just stuff you in a supply closet with all the bleach and vomit pails, BE GRATEFUL. 'Course he probably never paid for college and had a nice cushy apartment instead of dorm...
I really want Jack to be taken down a peg, can you tell? It's just... His whole attitude make me want to wring his neck....
Author's Response:
Yeah I can tell you really have something against Jack but I won't fault you for it, his behaviour would extract such a response from the readers.
No, he didn't exactly pay his own way through college, not when his parents can afford to do that for him but I'd also raise a complaint over such a place but having slept on dirt during my time in the army, I'd put up with it for one to two nights, might even clean the place myself.
Date: January 19 2015 5:34 PM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
@mjfan
I have other stories going, and I am not sure when I want to release them, but I want to be able to dedicate myself to a single story at a time.
Vacation Abroad: Immigration's plotline has been written, but actual chapters are yet to be written. It depends on how me and Nostory coordinate. So while I can't give a definite answer, it will come out sometime this year, but most likely during the same time the original came out in 2014. So sometime in summer, most likely. Due to me having time. But it could come out earlier, it all depends on how the two other stories go, how fast I write them, but I have not forgotten about Vacation.
Author's Response:
Which of course I'll be more than willing to help with.
Date: January 19 2015 5:29 PM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
It should be noted that any spelling mistakes are my fault, to anybody who noticed any, as I didn't get to check the chapter because something went wrong my email.
Other than that, really loved the interaction with Lauren. Intense, creepy, and had that sort of feeling you get in a movie where you feel that at any second, the whole situation can change. Especially considering just how polite Lauren is, in comparison to Jack's naivete.
Author's Response:
Don't sweat over it, can't fault you for technical difficulties.
Thank you, I really wanted to make it feel like Lauren was a woman you wouldn't want to cross.
Date: January 19 2015 5:12 PM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
Thank you..
Author's Response:
You're welcome.
Date: January 19 2015 9:34 AM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
Do you know vgiv is gonna write vacation abroad 2
Author's Response:
He has plans for it but not at the moment.
Date: January 18 2015 12:30 AM Title: Flashback
god
jack you fucking tool
Author's Response:
You should read ahead and see what he does after that!
Date: January 10 2015 7:48 AM Title: Wallace's Giantess
I actually kind of hope they don't reconcile. I don't know why, maybe I'm just hoping the redux takes a different turn from the original?
Author's Response:
Either way, the story will be very different from the original, I guarentee it!
Date: January 09 2015 3:58 PM Title: Wallace's Giantess
I'm excited to find out how you get these two back together again, assuming that's even your goal this time...I'm starting to wonder if Jess and Jack will even end up together in this story or not! So far, it doens't appear that way!
Author's Response:
Haha that is a secret only I and vgiv will know.
Date: December 30 2014 9:35 PM Title: Never Piss Off a Giantess
Is there gonna be the whole lauren and the leginton company scandal and the terroist group hostage situation all over again?
Author's Response:
I can't spoil that so I'll just say wait and see.
Date: December 30 2014 8:55 PM Title: Meals and Monopoly
Most intense game of monopoly i've ever read about on this website!
Author's Response:
So far I think its the only game of monopoly on this site XD!
[Report This]Date: December 19 2014 7:40 PM Title: Never Piss Off a Giantess
I think maybe Jessica is being a little unreasonable when it comes to wanting people not to be afraid of her. I mean yeah, Jack should NOT have run off but he WAS scared. Im a fan of GTS and even I don't know what I'd do in the face of a real GTS, running away is something completely understandable! And then the irony of it all is she was yelling at him about why he ran away and why he was scared of her while she stomping around in a fury (not exactly making youself look non-threatening there, Jess).
While I do think Jack is a douche and more in the wrong here Jessica is piling it on by being rough with him, threatening him and finally humiliating him at the end there...Not exactly something a model citizen would do, and CERTAINLY not something you'd do to someone injured that almost died not long ago. Also, I'm surprised you let things get this far on, Im excited to see how you patch things up between them, their relationship looks to be getting more and more hopeless with each chapter.
Great one though. I guess I can say that BOTH characters irk me in some way, so if that was your intention, good job.
Author's Response:
In Jessica's defence, she put up with a lot of crap from Jack from the moment he woke up, she just lost it.
I never intended for Jack to be liked at this point, Jessica wasn't supposed to be so easy to like either.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2014 5:20 PM Title: Never Piss Off a Giantess
I kinda wish something would come up so Jack and Jessica could leave on a better note. I'm really enjoying this story and want to see more. I did like how Jessica was finally letting Jack have it though.
Also would love to see Caitlin and Jessica fighting over Jack(I realize Jessica could squash in a second but I'd like it for the interactions between the two as well as how Jack would treat that situation)
aaron
PS I hope Jessica doesn't really have halitosis because chronic bad breath is not good for anyone.
Author's Response:
First off, thanks for the review. I don't get as much as Downtrodden but this has become a pet project of mine and I will finish the saga of Jessica. It is what made me get off my lazy lurker's ass and write this story before realising how rushed and unplanned it was, opting for a reboot to redo it.
Jack's been an ass, no two ways about it. I would love to see a fight between two girls, one giant and one small over the same man and yes, Jessica could end it by squashing Caitlin in a second but will she? Will there even be a love triangle? It could happen but so far, Caitlin is just a flashback. For little Jack, to be caught between two beautiful women, I'd really envy him!
Jessica's breath is fine but she isn't immune to that thing we call "morning breath."
Date: December 12 2014 9:46 AM Title: Bungle in the Jungle
Not the best way to continue a sound relationship is it? Well, I guess Jessica has some reason to be angry but at the same time she could have just left him to die: it certainly would have been easier...
Author's Response:
I agree but Jessica isn't the type of person to leave someone to die, Jack is her responsibility and her guest, even if he is a dick who ran away for all the wrong seasons. I'd say she is well with her rights to be angry at Jack, this was the incident that proved to be too much for her.
[Report This]Date: November 22 2014 2:49 PM Title: The Sweet Escape
I loved the original story. It was great, and this one, still has the same feel of the old one, but still feels like a new experience. I absolutely love it.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it but I know I can be better so I decided to rewrite it to remove any inconsistencies and also to improve the quality of writing.
So far it still retains a lot of the old story but after a while, you'll notice the differences. I'd say this is where the remake starts to deviate from the original, I think you'll like it.
[Report This]Date: November 18 2014 10:44 PM Title: Bath and Bitching
I'm fine with the remake, it kind of hard to tell the difference. But it seems better, so i guess that's the difference. I find myself enjoying read this remarkable remake.
Author's Response:
So far it does seem similar although Jack hates Jessica and Jessica is very witty. By the ninth chapter you'll see what is so different with this remake, it'll go in directions the original did not.
Date: November 18 2014 8:57 PM Title: The Sweet Escape
It's odd how excited Jack was to escape...But really? What did he need to escape from? Jessica didn't appear to be holding him captive. Although, I suppose I'd be nervous if I landed in the care of a massive woman like that.
Who knows what she might do if I ask her for help to leave? Would she get offended? Never know...Maybe Jack is a little smart not to leave anything to chance like this.
Still, I can't help but feel bad for poor Jess, it's really starting to look like their relationship isn't gonna be salvageable, even though I KNOW how things are supposed to end up. Good stuff, Nostory, I was begining to wonder when you'd update this (although I'm one to talk, it's been months since I updated my story XP).
Author's Response:
Let me see if I can explain it to you. Jessica has never held him captive or treated him like a prisoner, her last words to him before she went to bed made it clear she sees him as a person and not a toy. However for him to be constantly afraid of her isn't irrational, she could easily make him her slave if she chose to.
Jack is assuming a lot of Jessica here, she might get offended but she does know he can't stay forever so at some point him leaving will happen, she doesn't seem like the type who will keep him from his family.
I feel bad for Jess as well, she has treated Jack very well so far and well...you think you know but the path to it might surprise you. Thanks for the review and when you do update your story, I'll definitely read it!
Date: October 08 2014 5:44 PM Title: Meals and Monopoly
Kind of a fun chapter and I certainly like to see them get along somewhat. I will say that Im not sure how these two conflicting personalities will love oneanother someday, its gonna be tough to write that convincingly.
Author's Response:
Erm...opposites attract? I like seeing them clash with each other, its more fun to write than the often bland interaction between Jessica and Jack in the last one.