[Report This]Date: August 25 2024 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 32: Time-In
Hello! Long time enjoyer of this website here, but I rarely log in to leave a review. However, I felt it was necessary in this case. This story is amazing, I come onto this page for smut, but stumbled on a literary masterpiece. Just wanted to say I appreciate the time and effort you have put into this piece and intend to read the next addition to this series with bated breath.
Date: November 22 2019 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 18: One Small Step for Man, One Small Bite for Maggie
Wow, did Maggie enjoy abusing his member like this? Does she intend to go further that way in?
[Report This]Date: May 10 2017 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Yo! I love your stories! Totally dig your writing style! Please do not stop! I check back damn near everyday to see if you updated your current stories. Also, I've been reading stuff in this site for a couple if years now, but I've never made an account until now; only just so I could leave comments/reviews like this one lol. I just needed to l let you know that you rock man! Love your characters, stories, and your overall writing style! You are, by a long shot, my favorite author of writings worldwide! Lol I never read!! I DON'T read.. Except for kinky smut that was written by a likeminded individual.. Anyway, keep it up man! Don't ever stop! Love it so that I may live it!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks very much. Glad to hear you enjoy my work. I'll keep it up as long as I've got ideas I feel are worth writing down.
Date: December 21 2016 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 32: Time-In
I love your turning this into something meaningful, I really hope you let Scott resist
Author's Response:
Thanks. We'll see Scott being a little less passive in TO7.
[Report This]Date: March 07 2016 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
It's been awhile since your last story. I hope you are doing ok.
Author's Response:
I'm doing well, I've just been too busy to post lately.
[Report This]Date: July 05 2015 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 32: Time-In
Interesting story/series. The number of enemies this guy has is off the charts. Reviewer Jimbob makes a good point. Scott can get out of this if he finds the mental strenght and determination to play it smart. It's hard to decide what the best course or satisfying course of action will be for Scott. But the end result must be that he never have to deal with his family and other enemies again. Only than will he truly be free. Should he just try to escape to another state/country or take his revenge on everyone first? In both cases it will hit the family hard. If there is no more Scott to punish, guess who will be next in line to be the victims of a frustrating selfdestructive Judy. If Scott dies in the process he'll also be free. Away from his crazy mother and his weak-minded siblings.
Love your worlds full of peril, where someone must fight for his freedom against a super hostile environment. Your character development, etc is also excellent.
Author's Response:
Scott definitely has a lot of people working against him in this story. There is a way out of all this for him (supposedly) as long as he can put up with it for now and push through. Scott's not quite the revenge taking type, but you never know. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: May 16 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Can you say when part 7 of Time-out might come out?
Author's Response:
I try not to guess post times for future stories so I don't end up making a liar of myself, particularly with larger things like Time-Out. It will be easier to say once I've finished some of my shorter ongoing stories.
Date: April 13 2015 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 32: Time-In
Btw (and this is my last comment, I swear), I used to think that Mr Stevens was either the real object of Judy's, ehm, bad feelings, or a bad thought she wanted to remove - he might spoil her public image after all.
After a bit of reflection I'm starting to think she left the tv on on purpose, so that Scott knows that refusing will not accomplish anything, she'll just make the same proposal to Mr Stevens after shrinking him.
All the above assuming that she cannot be linked in any way to his scam of course!
Author's Response:
Hehe. Well, I don't want to say anything that will spoil something from the 7th story. But you're on track to think that just about everything Judy does to Scott is very calculated in order to send a message.
[Report This]Date: April 13 2015 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 31: For the Good
Misreading Aaron's comment I looked for "power play" and found https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Power_play_(sporting_term) - I didn't know the expression, is that the reason for the title? I thought it was only, well, about the literal meaning.
Author's Response:
The title is a double meaning, but not the sporting term. It refers to Judy's grab for power, as well as Scott being played with by people stronger than him (physically and politically).
[Report This]Date: April 13 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 32: Time-In
That was unexpected, I almost thought his dad had been forgotten many chapters ago!
I have too many things in my head to write them properly, so I hope you'll forgive me for a bullet list...
- I second Jimbob's comment entirely.
- eleven month? Just curious - he know exactly how long he's supposed to serve, or was he really daydreaming when the judge told him?
- "I think you'll surprise yourself" - weird how Ella might have said the exact same words; I hope he does.
- I can't stop thinking about the alternative of Judy acting like she said she might and threatening to go back to her old ways if he doesn't do as told. That would have taken a few more chapters, but I swear it's a coincidence...
- I can finally read Julia's new chapters! BWAHAHAHA!
Author's Response:
The eleven months is for his first disciplinary board review - he's not necessarily going to be freed at that point. Scott certainly will be surprising himself (and probably others) in the future.
Thanks for all your reviews on this. Hope you like the new Julia!
Date: April 01 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 30: Ella's Words
Short review because in a few minutes I've got to stop reading for at least a few hours.
What's non-canon about the 1st story? You even mentioned right in this story that "She’d of course apologized numerous times in the time afterward" - did I miss something?
Author's Response:
A couple small things. The first story makes it seem like Judy's PMRD is the only one of its kind, since Ella hasn't heard of shrinking before. In general, too, the personalities of both Judy and Ella are a little different. Judy was shown being a little more focused on making sure her son learned his lesson out of love, while Ella was just having some fun. From the second story onward, Judy's goals have more to do with self-advancement and teaching Scott his place.
[Report This]Date: April 01 2015 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions
Certainly Nancy didn't even *try* to hide what she did... if this story weren't finished I'd be speculating about it right now.
You have no idea how relieved I am to read about someone behaving like they're family! Otoh, having to care for his siblings as well means that giving up in any form is no longer an option.
Author's Response:
Well, Scott's got to have something to keep him going now, doesn't he? Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: March 15 2015 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
You have a point, Joy and Mark's relationship is far more normal than Judy and Scott's, or as normal as it can be within the Shrink Act universe anyway. I do hope we see Joy and Mark bonding in someway.
And thank you for these stories, they are really fun to read. Both the ones with the tiny person and big people get along and the ones where they don't.
Author's Response:
There actually are families in the Shrink Act universe that are not grossly dysfunctional like the Stevenses! Any ways we see Joy and Mark bonding will definitely be much less messed up than Judy and Scott.
Sure thing. I'm glad to hear you like my stories at both ends of the spectrum.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
So I'm guessing Judy won't be giving Scott any more petting sessions now? I really liked that scene, though with the way things ended I'm not sure if she'd be inclined to give him more.
Maybe Joy and Mark can pick up on this?
Author's Response:
I won't totally rule out something like that happening again, in case Judy feels the need to emotionally throw Scott off, but they're probably on a hiatus. And I'm not sure Joy and Mark have a twisted enough relationship (like Judy and Scott) for that to not be weird!
Date: March 08 2015 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Oh, having read the comments on chapter 28: "Nancy's actions won't go unnoticed by Scott's family". The story is done, so it's too late to predict their reactions without looking ridiculous, but - Hallelujah!
Author's Response:
Hehe. I'm not always a 100% jerk to my characters, I promise. Sometimes...
[Report This]Date: March 08 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Real Life had a small part as well, but seriously - it took me WEEKS to read these last few chapters, take it as a compliment; especially since there's a few more AND I have yet to read the new Julia chapters! (and the new stories, and catch up on the Omega spinoff...)
A couple of sparse notes:
"And then Scott’s air froze in his chest. He hacked desperately, somehow fighting his way back into a normal breathing pattern, and clenched his muscles up, tightening his fists and shuddering at the feeling of Nancy’s sweaty palms clasped against his stomach and legs to hold him steady." - For the 1st time I'm really proud of him. Not that he should care, but...
"lenses of his classes" (a few chapters ago)
Author's Response:
Sounds like an endurance. I appreciate you reading all my stuff even as it continues piling up. Hope you like the new stories and the end of this one.
And thanks for catching the typo.
[Report This]Date: February 18 2015 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 32: Time-In
Holy shit, Scott's dad is not only alive but a criminal!! Can't wait to see where you take that little tidbit of information.
As for Judy and Scott's powwow, that happened exactly liked I'd hoped. She was so cold and calloused but yet in her mind had his best interests at heart. But then when she gave him the ultimatum, I felt like his description was accurate. She just wants him to be a mascot or poster child for this Shrink Act phenomenon and she will either use him for that or use him for her own enjoyment(of course that's my favorite choice for him). Since he doesn't want to let her win, he may be spending a lot more time at an inch tall under or around her giant sized 12s. I especially liked it when she playfully bounced her foot knowing full well the ramifications of such a small action from her to tiny Scott between her toes.
But Scott may have a little light because Maggie most likely will be less inclined to torment him now but if Scott doesn't take Judy's offer then she could employ someone else's help to blatantly humiliate her son.(which that could include Nancy or somebody else from her book club)
Overall I'm extremely satisfied with how Judy dropped the hammer on Scott. She's an awesome character and hope she's still the main focal point of the next story.
aaron
PS would it be out of the realm of possibilities to suggest Scott be forced to give his mother a pedicure? Like with lotion and the whole nine yards? At her(and my) preferred height of course.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing, man. Good points about Judy and Scott, and even if he doesn't decide for a little while, he's still going to be spending some time down at that height regardless.
Things will definitely appear different with Maggie in the next story, even if things aren't completely fixed with Scott yet. I won't spoil, but there will be others besides Judy tormenting Scott in the next story. And considering what I'm titling the next one, Judy will indeed be a focal point.
That pedicure image may indeed be something you see in a future story. ;)
Date: February 17 2015 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 32: Time-In
thanks for clarification!
PS Is the option for contacting an author disabled? I contacted two and no reply.
Author's Response:
To my knowledge it has not been disabled.
Date: February 16 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 32: Time-In
Amazing story, can't wait to see part 7, hopefully won't have to wait too long...
Author's Response:
Thanks! I will try not to make it be too long.
Date: February 16 2015 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 32: Time-In
Oh man I need to refresh my memory! What Maggie's blackmail are you talking about?
Author's Response:
"Blackmail" was probably not the right term, but he's talking about when she put him in her mouth in exchange for calling Ella.