[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I'm not gonna lie I'm a little disappointed that Judy won't make an appearance for a couple more chapters. I hate to say it but Maggie's character annoys me.(I may be alone in that respect) However, I will still be tuning in to this story because I'm intrigued by how vague your description was. Wish I had my normal positive things to say but I'm feeling less and less inclined to please people these days... I am glad Ella will be making an appearance haven't heard from her in awhile. Anyways I'm looking forward to see where this story goes from here.
aaron
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Judy should be appearing by the fifth chapter.
Date: July 15 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Ok, I've been a bit busy in the last weeks, but still I can't believe that while I'm reading the shrink act files you've already finished that and even started two new stories...
Happy next-few-days to me!
Author's Response: Happy days indeed. You better catch up quickly! Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Great chapter and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Ah Maggie, one of your greatest creations.
Good stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Date: July 15 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
11 months before he MIGHT get parole. Ouch. No visiting friends? I thought you implied in the comments that his girlfriend would make an appearance at some point. With the treatment he's getting, I'm suprised he doesn't have any serious injuries. Good writing as always.
Author's Response: His girlfriend will be showing up later on in the story. It's a good point you make about potential injuries; the best explanation I have is that Maggie's spent enough of her life being able to have Scott in her shoe that she can do it without permanently hurting him now.