[Report This]Date: August 12 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 4: Girl to Woman
Can't wait for next chapter. That's what I've been waiting for.
aaron
Author's Response:
There'll be plenty of Judy for the next several chapters
[Report This]Date: August 12 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 4: Girl to Woman
Great stuff as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks man
Date: August 12 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
Excellent chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: August 11 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks. It'll be posted soon.
Date: August 04 2014 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
Maggie is becoming even more lovely.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
Another great chapter. Going by her question, i take it Maggie was concerned and maybe worried when she found him knocked out?
Author's Response:
She was concerned, although at least partially because she knows the consequences would probably be dire for her if she permanently harmed him.
Date: August 01 2014 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
That soccer game is my ultimate fantasy. Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it a lot.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I do enjoy this series and how he is a tiny little toy for women's stinky feet. I think you've established the universe by which these characters act and relate to one another. I'm not sure why after 5 other installments of the family crushing and punishing him, a few readers would complain about the cruelty and ask you to tone it down. It's not a gentle story so please don't succumb to any requests that fundamentally go against your vision for these characters. I truly hope Judy forces her feet to do unspeakable things to Scott.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing. There will be some gentle content in this story, though most of the action will still be focused on intensive foot (and mouth) interaction, as it was with past installments. And Scott will be back with Judy's feet in a couple chapters.
Date: August 01 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Im hoping that the shower buddies reference was more than just her teasing him.
Author's Response:
I guess we'll have to wait and see...
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
Has to be the best series on here. Keep this line of attack up. Love the sisters interaction
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! Expect plenty more of the sister in later chapters.
[Report This]Date: July 31 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
I love Maggie.
Also at some point one of your sister tyrant characters needs to have a sister to torture, great stuff once again.
Author's Response:
I will certainly take that under consideration. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 31 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
Gonna have to agree with riczar on this one. There's gotta be a mental limit on how much they can pt them through, right? Weren't they supposed to be a normal suburban family before all this happened? Honestly, I'd say that even if it meant the an injury or two for Scott, it'd be worth it for the family to find out what that limit is. Maybe a flick to the stomach after a rough play sesson and he coughs up blood? Punctured innards and all that. In any case, I hope it lightens up a bit too.
Your detail is superb as usual though, nice work
Author's Response:
There probably is indeed a limit somewhere, and it just might get reached eventually (meaning almost definitely). I will say that, no, they were never really a very 'normal' family in the sense of having solidarity amongst the family members; Scott's been the troublemaker since he was a teen and his mother's punishments have fed into a vicious cycle that's made them all pretty sickly dysfunctional. The content will be a bit less dark within the next couple chapters. Glad you like the detail!
Date: July 31 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
Sigh, apparently the PMRD must significantly increase your durability. He should be bruised at the very least, if not have broken bones. What I 'm waiting to see is him get truly hurt and see how his family reacts. If the family shrugs it off, I'd probably kill myself, as it proves how they really feel. That's what ticks me off the most about this family. They don't seem to have a limit to how badly they will treat him. I assume the time outside his house is supposed to be a break for him, but the treatment is worse. Well I hope the story lightens up a little at some point.
Author's Response:
There is a bit of suspension of disbelief needed on the wearing-in-the-shoe-without-broken-bones thing, but what can I say, it's a giantess story. I will note that part of what makes Maggie so confident in what she does to him is that she's never done anything that yielded consequences like a real lasting injury, so such a thing might force her to at least look at her actions if it happened. The story will soften up a bit after this opening.
Date: July 31 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I think if I lived in this universe and wasn't a macrophile, I'd have prefered prison a million times over being a tiny possession to a family like his! At least in prison I'd get to keep a little dignity!
Author's Response:
I'm sure Scott is sharing that same sentiment.
[Report This]Date: July 27 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Two questions:
Will we ever see Judy shrink Maggie? Previous stories have implied she has been shrunk too.
And since we know Judy does care for her son even if she likes shrinking with him, what's the line she wouldn't cross and what are the guidelines and limits she gives Maggie when having her fun with Scott?
I really enjoy this series, l look forward to future chapters!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Maggie has actually not been shrunken by Judy before (for a fairly specific reason), though I can't say it won't happen at some point down the road. Judy's limits generally revolve around trying to keep Scott from being permanently harmed, hence why she doesn't want Maggie wearing him during games, though she has no problem with him being humiliated beyond belief if he's not being physically injured by it.
Date: July 27 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Two questions:
Will we ever see Judy shrink Maggie? Previous stories have implied she has been shrunk too.
And since we know Judy does care for her son even if she likes shrinking with him, what's the line she wouldn't cross and what are the guidelines and limits she gives Maggie when having her fun with Scott?
I really enjoy this series, l
[Report This]Date: July 22 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 2: Bend it Like Maggie
Can't wait for the next chapter. Always looking forward to more of the Time out Series :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 22 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 2: Bend it Like Maggie
Even if misguided Libby seems like one of the people who would be against the Shrink Act even if only against the rougher treatment of those in captivity.
Author's Response:
Safe to say you're right there. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: July 17 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
You should make a story in which scotts brother is shrunk too. I wonder if Maggie would treat her younger brother better than she treats scott
Author's Response:
That's going to happen in the next story. I won't spoil, but Maggie definitely does treat her shrunken brothers differently.
[Report This]Date: July 16 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I'm glad to see a new chapter because this has become my favourite series on the site.
Author's Response:
Thanks!