[Report This]Date: October 09 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 11: Phone and Foot Tag
Poor Scott, he should talk to Jack on how to live with bigger little sisters.
Author's Response:
Jack would probably consider what happens to Scott to be a vacation.
Date: October 09 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 11: Phone and Foot Tag
Hi, good story but I have a quick question, for the next chapter, could you put Kyle. I think it would be interesting if you expanded their relationship just a bit. You don't have to if you don't want to. Thanks ^_^
-Lisana
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Kyle will be appearing 2 chapters from now.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 11: Phone and Foot Tag
Oh hell no. I don't mind how much physical trauma you can put him through, but his own sister fucking with his love life is crossing one line too many. I don't know if this was your intention, but this chapter left me absolutely fuming. Getting cockblocked by your own sister during such a time like this is not okay. I'm not having a good time here. It was not poorly written, but I truly hated this chapter. I am not looking forward to what's to come. What I am looking forward to, however, is seeing swift justice bear down upon Maggie. Preferably in the form of several blows to the babymaker.
Author's Response:
Well, I'm sorry you didn't like the chapter. I did hope readers could try to sympathize with Scott's struggle here, though, and it sounds like you did. Maggie will eventually have to face up to her own cruelty.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 11: Phone and Foot Tag
Excellent chapter, in fact the last few have been stellar. Was a welcome change if not a bit of a tease to have Ella make the phone call but in all honesty I'm actually looking forward to what Maggie has in store for him(hope she shrinks him to a more manageable size *cough* 1in. *cough*) I'm little disappointed that Nancy and Judy didn't have fun with Scott at his tiniest size but I still enjoyed their interactions.
Can't wait to see when Judy's political career becomes more of a factor.
All and all, great stuff Jack. Looking forward to more of these great characters.(especially Judy)
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks man. Maggie won't be putting him down to 1 inch in this next chapter, but there will be a section later in the story where this will happen. Nancy actually prefers to have Scott a little bigger so she has more to work with, but Judy will be getting some time with Scott at 1 inch later as well.
Date: October 09 2014 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Good stuff as usual, though does this mean no Omega update today?
Author's Response:
It does mean that, sorry. I alternate posts between this and Omega, though, so the next one will be from that.
Date: October 05 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 10: Nancy's Proposal
I'm not sure what to think... I'd write he's **** up more than ever if I didn't know you, but even that seems unlikely :)
Yet for some reason I'm still thinking of Judy: either she doesn't care, or she lets her guard down with her friends (yeah, sure), or she wants him to be looking for mommy - any other idea?
PS
Ella! Doesn't she realize how much not answering sounds like the worst possible answer?
[Report This]Date: October 04 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 10: Nancy's Proposal
Ah poor Scott, you kind of feel bad for him but then remember what he did.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: Nancy's Proposal
This chapter is amazing. I feel like this is a tease of things to come(No pun intended).
This story looks like it will be the best one in the time-out series(They're all very good).
[Report This]Date: September 30 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 9: Business as Usual
I'd love to see a few chapters of Scott with Nancy. Excellent chapter btw.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Scott will get his fair share of time with Nancy in this story, particularly in a section nearer to the end.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Absolutely amazing. This has definitely become one of my favorite stories. The way his mother handles him is incredible. I have to say I hope we see her eventually cross the line and force some unexpected pleasure out of our little hero for her own fun.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! There may be some line crossing before the story is over, though probably not in a way you're expecting.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 9: Business as Usual
Poor kid, he's kind of living the dream speaking as a foot guy but having read the future stories on this matter you realize allowing these women in power is a terrible idea.
Author's Response:
Basically, it's a terrible idea to give power to any of the giantesses I write about...
Date: September 23 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
"Mommy loves you" now sounds even scarier than before; since she always has an ostensibly fine reason for everything, I really don't want to think how she will justify these kind of things.
Unless she's training him to face Nancy (yeah, sure...)
Btw, just out of curiosity, looking for "hubby", "husband", "dad", "widow", "father" etc didn't bring up anything - what happened to mr Stevens? Is it (will it be) important, or can we just assume he's out of their lives for whatever reason?
PS
In the 1st story: "As if sending a warning bell to her tiny sun" ;p
Author's Response:
Yes, Judy's actions in this chapter (and later ones) will indeed look much harder to justify. But Judy being Judy will have a reason for everything, even if it's twisted as hell.
Funny you mention Mr. Stevens; he'll actually be addressed later on in this story. So the answer is, yes he is important! And good catch on that typo.
Date: September 22 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
The only complaint I have is this story is not updated frequently enough, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I know the updates are a bit far apart, but I fully intend to keep up until the story is done.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
Speaking of Kyle, is there any chance he'll soften up his brother? I'd almost say that his brother giving him the cold shoulder bothers Scott more than what Judy and Maggie do. Almost.
Author's Response:
You're right that it hurts Scott more that Kyle treats him like this, because Maggie and Judy have always been rough, but his kid brother had been an ally before. There is a definite chance of Kyle starting to come around, though, and probably later on in this story, in fact...
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
One of my favorite series. Keep it up
Author's Response:
Thanks much!
Date: September 21 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
Another great chapter. Though I gotta say part of me hopes that Kyle will get the shrink punishment too so he can better understand what his brother goes through. He seems to be needlessly rude to him.
Maggie too, but her getting shrunk was suggested already.
Author's Response:
Thanks! We will definitely see Kyle reduced in size at some point, though not in this particular story. He's just deeply embittered towards Scott because he feels betrayed.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
This story is excellent so far. After the events of the first time out story, I wonder if Ella will abuse Scott's size as well(I'm sure nancy will).
I believe that he was set up(Drink was spiked by someone who has ties with his mother so they could enact their NWO plan in full force) but aside from that, I hope Ella doesn't hate Scott for too long for the crimes he was accused of.
Anyway, keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. It's probably no secret to say Nancy's going to take full adantage of Scott's size. Ella's a bit more complicated; she enjoys being around him while he's small, but understands how tough he has it here.
Interesting theory about a set-up; I guess we'll just have to wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
Another wonderful chapter, also he made off better than Jack did when Carly shared her cereal with him that faithful morning.
Author's Response:
Compared to the end of Blackmail 1, Scott's breakfast was a relaxing little English tea time.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 7: Cleanliness is Next to Godliness
Oh great. Nancy was one of my favorites from the club chapter. Would be sweet if she brought a secretary along too(who just so happens to be Ella and is shrunken down as well). I know I know, that's asking a little too much but hey I can dream right. Also love the fact that Judy put sweet smelling lotion on her giant size 12s. And him riding on his mother's foot was a nice scene.
I'd love to see Judy shrink Maggie down to 1in just like Scott or maybe Judy would leave her a bit bigger...(sorry but I just can't seem to get a tiny helpless Maggie at her mothers feet out of my mind)
aaron
PS since Nancy has a shrink gun too will she be able to make Scott smaller than 8in or will he only shrink with his moms gun?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. Ella won't be appearing for a while yet, and most likely not in a shrunken context, but you are indeed allowed to dream. Seeing Maggie shrink is an idea I've heard from a couple others as well. I promise there is a reason why Judy doesn't shrink her daughter (though that doesn't mean it'll never happen). And Nancy's shrink gun won't work on Scott, since he's only registered to his mom's gun and can only be shrunken by his mom or siblings with it.
Date: September 11 2014 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 7: Cleanliness is Next to Godliness
@Luidgi "meet this Nancy"? Either she's not so popular or you didn't read some of the previous episodes... in which case I sort of envy you XD
Author's Response:
Hehe. No matter where people meet her character, she's probably not going to leave a nice first impression.