Reviews For Ed the Insole
Reviewer: Giantess_Lover124 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: July 15 2014 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
It was a good story but watch the spelling on some words. Other then that it all seemed rushed and i believe that you took this story a little too fast and you could have made it longer.