So Andy has a thing going with Marie and Carla. This could with jealously or a full-on threesome.

Any time Betty says that something is random, I assume that she rigged it for her own amusement. Her statement that everyone was so predictable she didn't have to rig anything was interesting.

“There’s no drive to the market. In a few years things will slow down completely.” And this was written before September 2008, I gather.

Well look at that, are Dale and Paul starting to adapt? Maybe things will get better for them.

Prediction: Marie and Carla will grow, and the others will get smaller. Hailey could either become more of a tyrant, or turn around.

I can picture Betty walks in and says "Your actions determine your size", Then she walks out. The contestants are confused and look at Sherri who is laughing. Sherri notices them staring at her and she says goodnight amd sprints out of the house. Dale and Jerry decide to chase her, but Sherru then goes around the corner of the house and shrinks herself to 4 inches and hides. When Dale and Jerry turn the corner, they believe that Sherri dissapeared. Dale runs back to tell the others. Jerry just walks slowly arlnd the house whispereing to no one "Sherri, if your are there, will you go out with me on a date?" After no answer, Jerry returns back to the house.
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Sherri rememebrs Jerry's sleep with Hailey and feels bad for him. She then ponders the thought about going out with Jerry.
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Dale tells everyone that sherrir just dissapeared. Paul, Vera, Carla, Hailey, Marie tell him that he is just crazy and Sherri cant dissapear. Jerry confirms it and everyone suddnely believes it. Dale gets mad that no one believed him, so he goes to his room to sleep.
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Everyone else goes to sleep too.
Sherri then secretly enlarges Jerry so he is half sized. Jerry, still awake, notices that he is growing, and is now strong enough to get out of Hailey's grip. He exits the room to see a half sized sherri smiling at him. Jerry smiles back. Sherri says goodnight and Jerry says thanks. Sherri leaves leaving Jerry a little happy. He couldnt wait for the competition to be over.

The end.

First, i checked out your deviant art favorites, and they are amazing! Now i can see what your truly like in your writing. If you were a good artist, I know you will have some crazy good ideas to make.

Also, on your blog, Im looking forward to season 3,4 and 5 of the shrunking show, and the "Shrinking U" idea seems very interesting as well.
Actually, they are all interesting, but those ideas/stories are the ones im looking forward to read.

One of my favorite topics that i enjoy reading are the "girl finds and shrinks random guy story, and she plays with him with a bit of cruelty. She plays with him in her house and thats the setting most of the time. Then the only sexy person in the house would be the mother and she is the gentle but sexy type." (Just another idea. :) Carla reminds me of that dominant soman who is also caring. Thats what sparked my interest in MILfs recently.)

As for the chapter 15, wow, now Hailey is losing her support. This means that Carla has to be next in line for the throne! Dale is too weak anyway. The future will be awesome.

That sex scene though. I thought the fling that Andy and Carla had was creative, but this was special. A one-eight person with Carla, wow. Andy sure got a show. Like him, I also would have Carla all to myself, but Marie showed Andy what he could possibly do at that size.

Then Andy slept on top of Carla and Marie on top of him. Talk about sleeping with women. That is the new definition of that phrase.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I follow a lot of really good GTS artists on DeviantArt, you should definitely check them out. I might blog about my favorites on my new blog sometime.

Paul just keeps on sinking. I can see him breaking eventually.

And we now have a threesome, and one where the man is in the middle sizewise. This is another unusual sexual adventure.

Whoa, whoa, whoa! Two new shrinking machines?!! Tom is back?!! Shrunk to under 3 inches?!!!

This opens up a new door full of possibilties!

Will Sherri show Tom to the contestants? If yes, Andy needs to talk to him.

Also, the biggest takeaway is the shriniking machine in the house! I mean where is it? The main room? A bedroom? A bathroom?

I bet Sherri put it somewhere.

If this was Betty's idea, it was brilliant. Now she can interfere with the contestants without having a competition.

Also, is the shrinking machine in the house set to 3 inches? That would be awesome.

I could picture Carla and Andy deciding to take a bath together. Since Carla is taller, she goes to get some things while Andy starts the water. Then he shrinks to 3 inches in the tub, and he cant escape since he is too short. Then Carla shows up, and...well... you know what happens then.

Is the next chapter about the contestents going to bed? Maybe Vera trying to control Paul? Hailey dominates Jerry, or we can have round 2 of Carla and Andy.

But seriously, this new shrinking machine in the house is the most important thing to me right now. It literally changes everything. Haha, Betty might shrink the whole group and have 8 little 3 inch people crawl on her.

Then Sherri invites her season one people and shrinks them to 3 inches.

Then Betty and Sherri have a 15-some with 3 inch tinies.

Ok, nevermind that, it seems too bizarre to picture 15 tiny people on two giant women.

I got this crazy idea of Sherri sneaking into the house at 3 am, and shrinking soemone and using them for an hour, and then put them back in bed so that contestant thinks that is a nightmare. Well, she still has Tom though.

Hey Benton, with more talk about season one people, i think it would be recomended to let the readers know that they should read season 1.

ok, so now there are 3 shrinking machines.

This story got so much better!

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yes, from this point on a person can be shrunk from pretty much anywhere. Going into the shrinking booth is no longer required! We'll see how the Contestants take that news...

With Marie, you've hinted at other lines of business Betty could expand into, and then there's Andy, Hailey and Carla.

First to be eliminated? I'd say Dale. He's made himself less popular than Paul. And winner? I'm going to call Marie.

I think Dale will be the first eliminated.  Either him or Carla cause they seem the most disliked.   As for who I want to win Vera or Andy.  Vera because I like the fact that she is athletic and dont think she would be a very mean queen or hold any grudges after the show.  Andy because I think it would vs funny since he doesn't seem to want to win.  Of course that could all be an act...  Otherwise I would like to see Hailey win but that's cause I like blondes. 

Hmm. those are some good questions.

I think Paul will be first to be eliminated, but i want Dale to be eliminated.

Im rooting for Carla to win the whole thing, but I feel like Marie is going to win.

Now let me explain. I feel like Betty wants to eliminate a guy first and she wants a guy who acts tough and is afraid of being small. I believe it will be Paul especially with how he feels embarrassed with giant women.

I want Dale to be eliminted, becuase I feel like he contributes the least to this story and he seems to have the most boring personality. He was my second choice for the person who i think is going to be eliminated. Dale has been small plenty of time, and i think he will be big for awhile now.

As for the winner, I think it will be Marie. I can easily picture Marie returning for Season 3 as a co host, and telling the new contestants about her joy of shrinking. I think Betty likes Marie as well as everyone else does so I feel like Marie will be given all the contestants at the end. I always remember her being small, so i think in the end she becomes big.

Now for who I want to win, that would be Carla. In the very first chapter, i felt the Carla was super sexy based on her description and occupation. I even wrote in my first review that Carla was my favorite character. I was fortunate that she was the sexy dominating giantess you had in store for Andy. It makes me like her even more. My favorite giantess is the dominating one, where all the pleasure goes to her, but the domination is not cruel or sadistic. Instead, Carla is dominating in a gentle way, and seems to be a bit kinky as well. She seems smart and creative and I want her to be on the top.

The chapter was actually a long one. Of course, it was just one night, but lots of stuff happened.

First, Hailey as queen is enjoying her role as a dominating person. She even made people rub her feet! She reminds me of Sarah from season one.

Second, Vera is protecting Paul from Dale. I know Vera was protecting Paul, but why didnt she take the opportunity to convince Dale to vote for Hailey? Its like Vera just gave up on Dale. Vera reminds me of Serine from Season one.

Then we have Dale, who seems to be hated by everyone again. Atleast he is big, but now no one feels sorry for him anymore. He is likely to shrink again soon. He reminds me of Dave from season one.

Carla is enjoying her position, but of course wants to be queen. (I hope so too.) She doesnt even have to focus on keeping Andy with her becuase she knows that he would always follow her. Now Carla can do her various acitivites around the house while still having control over Andy. She reminds me of Sherri from season one.

Paul is quarter-sized, but he is acting like its the end of the world and he is not even the smallest. I bet looking at Marie gives him shivers about that size. He reminds me of Tom from season one. (I remember when Tom said that he was the first man to be put into 3 different vaginas. Since my name is Tom, and I like insertion, I find that to be an awesome coincidence. )

Jerry is small but also enjoying life. He gave some ideas to Andy, and I think Andy might like em. Jerry seems to be a wise man, so I think he should give those ideas to Carla so she can use them on Andy. Well, Carla is already creative, so i guess he doesnt need to. When Jerry said that Hailey goes too far, it remined me when Bill thought Sarah went too far with him in season one. Jerry reminds me of Bill.

Andy my friend, is still learning how to controll his emotions. For some reason in this relationship, it seems like Carla is like a hot MILF, and Andy is a lucky teen who gets to sleep with her. Its one of my dream scenarios. A MILF teaching a young teen to be her boy toy amd I love reading about that. I picture MILFs to have all the experience, all the crazy ideas and Carla fits perfectly into that role. Andy also fits into that inexpereinced role, letting Carla dominate him and show him all her moves, one size at a time. :) and he reminds me of Cameron from season one.

Marie, is super tiny, but I think she got over it again. She enjoys the attention, and as a young college girl, her ripe body, and stamina helps make her the perfect dancer. She reminds me of Annie from season one.

Sherri said something interesting will happen tomorow, Benton asked who will be eliminated. That means something big is gonna happen soon.

I dont know which chapter it will be becuase, we still have to see the movie and bed scenes for tonight.

I enjoy reading these chapters once a day. Keep them coming!

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Interesting analysis as always! Hmm, you never know, Betty could be rigging things to get who she wants back there at this very moment--it's hard to tell! And I actually agree a bit about Dale, at least until this point in the story. With both Dale and Paul being macho manly-men who get brought down to size (literally), I made the decision that if I made Season Three there wouldn't be anyone fitting that arch-type as the trope is getting a bit worn thin.

I like this story very much, i hope dale and Marie make up. Marie is my favorite so far, Carla was at the beginning but is starting to drop on my list.

I didn't know the titan stories were deleted from here and put somewhere else either.