Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 27

This is the most interesting competition yet. There are good surprises, and all the stuff in the maze is intriguing and amusing. There have been all sort of wacky adventures.

I'm a bit surprised that Dale won. I figured Betty would have her sights on him, and women tend to do better in general. This is some nice variety.

Hailey, Andy and Carla have three ribbons. Jerry and Vera have two ribbons. Hailey, Andy and Vera will probably get through, leaving Carla and Jerry.

In the game: Marie, Dale, Hailey, Vera, Andy.

With Betty and Sherri: Paul, Jerry, Carla, Let's see if I'm right.

Author's Response:

I tried to not always go for what people would expect to happen in this story--I'm pretty sure no one saw Dale coming out first!

You'll see if your predictions are correct very soon!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

I love Tom's suggestion to Paul, that cracked me up, haha!

So Tom and Paul have their own surveillance room? That's awesome!

When Jerry said 'some game' , isn't that a Harry potter reference? When there was a maze competition in that movie.

Yes! Carla, I hope you win! Have Andy give you his flags as well.

Poor Jerry, "nice guys finish last".

Carla reminds me of Catwoman with her desire to control things and use sexy behaviors to get what she wants. And she's feisty! Did you see how she outplayed Jerry. Wow!

Paul is rooting for Vera to stay in the game. But what about Vera? She might consider losing so she can reunite with Tom.

I'm loving the obstacles. :)

I mean colored pencils, marshmellows, soap, and even underwear! Very creative, especially with the soap slide.

Marie is still the good girl she is. She didn't want to control the train that threw off Carla and Jerry. Now the question is, does she think Betty is at least sort of sadistic?

What happened to Sherri? She is probably still shocked about her encounter with Carla. Makes sense now.

My next concern is that after this competition, there will be only 5 people left! Marie and 4 others. I hope the people who will be eliminated get to return like season one.

I'm loving this competition. Very entertaining. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yep, Tom and Paul are perched well above everyone in the maze! Betty's given them some abilities to control certain obsticals but not too much.

I don't think I made a deliberate Harry Potter reference, but the maze was the third challenge for the Tri-Wizard Cup in the Goblet of Fire, and as I am a big Harry Potter fan, there's a chance that this came through subconciously.

I'm glad you are enjoying the obsicals. It was fun to bring that sense of adventure into this story for this competition.

And don't worrry--everyone who is eliminated will be sticking around!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

Well that's a change in relationships. Good thing, too: it keeps things interesting. This story is definitely a big improvement over Season 1.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I think so too.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 25

Wooohooo! A chapter the next day! Finally!

Wow, 3 chapters of competition! Sounds awesome!

I hope you post these competition chapters faster becuase it could be depressing to wait for multiple days only to read just another part of the conpetition.

With drama filled chapters, I dont mind wait for 2-3 days for a chapter becuase each chapter is so deep that I can reflect on what happened.

But for a competition chapter, theres not much to reflect, so I am eager to read the rest of the competition. If you post the chaptes after a lot of time, then I would hVe have to reread the previous chapter.

Next, I recommend everyone to check out bentons blog, becuase there is some pretty interesting giantess stuff there that is not on this site.

Also, I recommend everyone to check out Benton's deviant art page as well as giantess stuff on deviant art. Sometimes you read a story about a giantess doing some exotic activity with a tiny person, and you try to imagine what that will look like. Well deviant art has surprised me and O have seen some very exotic sexy pics and animations there.

As this chapter, I really want to know where Carla and Marie come from. I mean a nudist colony? At first I thought that was a joke, but I was shocked that it exists, and now I want to meet Marie and learn about her lifestyle.

Same with Carla. She sexifies everything. "Seal deals with a kiss" . Wow! That is awesome. Does her whole family do that or just her? And Carla does more than a peck on the lips, she goes hardcore, leaning in on Dale giving him that shocking effect that made Sherri run away in embarrassment. Its amazing how much power Carla has with such simple actions. No wonder Andy liked her so much!

Did they just walk in the conference room? That doesnt give me any hints on the competition. Now if it said "Experimentation room" I would be laughing so hard if I read that. The looks on the contestants would be priceless. But conference room? Hmm, there must be a catch.

As for the competition, who will be victorious? Hmm, since I have no idea what the competition even is, im just going to say Andy since he never wins anything and I think its his time to win now.

As for elimination, I hate to say this, but I think Carla is going to be elimianted. She for sure is going to be shrunk, since Tom and Sherri seem to have agreed on that.

The real question at the end of this chapter should be "What is the competition?" Thats what I should be answereing now, and I should guess the victors and losers 2 chapters later before the competition ends.

Well, if I have to guess what it is, I think its a giant maze, where the tinies all run through and find soemthing in the center.

Another idea is that another contestant has arrived back from season one and Betty enlarged her to a super giantess, and the tines have to travel from the mouth to the anus like a race. Ok, nevermind, thats too bizarre.

Another idea is a the mini soccer playing field game from season which I forgot what its called. Tom and Sherri vs Paul and Betty. The six contestants are the soccer balls, and Paul, Betty, Tom and Sherri alll have to push the contestants in the desired goals.

Those are my top ideas which are probably not even close, but I still cant wait for the next chapter. We are already half-way there!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 24

Wow, I wanted Carla and Andy to stay together, but it definately looks like that wont happen for a while. (Unless Carla kidnaps Andy and uses him, which would be awesome!)

I hope Carla grows back for the competition.

Wow, Carla is a master of sexy moves with guys and girls! She embarresses Sherri so bad that Sherri had to shrink Carla. Haha.

We are nearing the midway point of this story, and this show is very odd at the moment. I mean, I cant really tell who is friends with who anymore.

Its interesting how Carla was suspected to be queen, but now she seems to be the outcast. I also feel bad for her since both Andy and Marie have betrayed her.

I thought Andy wouldnt mind getting snatched up by Carla. She wont really torture him, but if she does it will be sexual torture and Andy will probably enjoy it.

Carla wants to have sexy fun every night. Since she lost Andy, she got Tom, and when she lost Tom, she wanted Sherri. I hope trying to get Sherri wasnt an act of desperation. Carla seems like the hottest girl on the show in my opinion. She will get someone, but who?

If the next chapter is the competition, then how will Andy participate? He is too small, or will Sherri enlarge him for the competition?

Next chapter is chapter 25, halftime of this show. I cant wait!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 22

First of all, I checked out that Tigerwomen story and you blew my mind! It was well thought out and it sparked a few ideas in my head. You also provided enough details so I cant wonder how certain things happened becuase you already answered them. That introduction was fantastic.

I think Tigerwomen is the better title name. Its more unique compared to Ownership.

There are a lot of names you can chose to replace Hu with. I usually start with celebrity names. Im sure you will find one that is suitbale for the story.

As for this chapter of the shrinking show, I expected Paul to show a little more worry. You mentioned that he was "confused, worried, and terrifired" at certain points, but i just didnt feel it.

It felt like Paul handled it well, and he wasnt as afriad of Betty's enourmous features as I thought he would be. He seems more like a tough man now. Im not sure if this was inteneded, or if I just read it differently.

Wow! Tom was inside Betty the whole time! He is probably immune to suffocating now, haha.

When Betty said to Tom "I will leave you here for Sherri", that sounds like a hot topic. One giantess leaving a tiny inside a trap just waiting for another giantess to show up and use them. Now thats hot.

I wonder how the contestants are doing....I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the Tiger Women introductory chapter! I hope you check back with my blog because I've been posting again--though I might also post on DeviantArt because I dowbt many people are going to happen upon my WordPress.

I'm glad you liked the new chapter! Paul certainly handled himself with Betty a lot better than other people did--and will, if you catch my drift.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 21

Hmmm. That sex scene ended quickly, im glad Andy enjoyed it.

At first, i felt bad for Marie in this chapter, but then i felt glad for her. Since Marie is comfortable with naked people, perhaps she can have a threesome with Jerry and Dale.

Paul is doomed, end of story. haha.

Vera and Hailey have a mini alliance, but i don think it will matter much.

I for sure thought Carla was going to be queen, but Jerry and Dale's new alliance certainly changed that.

Marie would be a great leader. She is that natural caring type of person.

Ha, what is wrong with Hailey? She abuses her lovers and claims to have treated them well. lol. And Vera believed her?! Well i guess Vera agreed knowing that Hailey was her only hope.

This was a very long chapter, so it kinda made up for the delay in posting.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2014 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

I thought that you get eliminated when you shrunk at 1/25...Paul is at 1/16 of his size

Reviewer: RyuuKaida Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 21

About damn time

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

I detect a crack in the solid structure that has been Marie and Carla's friendship so far.