[Report This]Date: October 13 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
In addition, I don't see how Jerry or Vera will win. I can't picture them having a good time with Betty. I think it comes down to Carla and Marie.
In season 1, Sherri returned from Betty and won the season. Perhaps Carla can do the same. Carla and Betty will defiantly get along.
Speaking of Carla and Betty. I think Carla is truly the sex master. She surprised Betty in the doll house act, and is basically controlling Andy.
Betty got jealous of Carla or admires her, so she copied Carla's actions to get Andy's attention.
Now back in the compound, we have Marie, Carla, Vera, and Jerry. 3 girls, 1 guy. Hmmmm. Then Sherri comes along, make it 4 girls, 1 guy. Lucky Jerry.
The next competition is a physical competition. Jerry is the only guy, so he probably will having a lot of fun in there. But will he be tough enough to fight a girl? That could be interesting.
Back to the winner choice, it feels like it is really close to Carla. I mean, she loves Betty, unlike any of the other 3 contestants. Carla loves dominating tinies. She can toy with Andy while Sherri toys with Tom. Carla might even buy a shrinking machine with her million and buy Andy. Lol. Seems kinda realistic every time I think about it.
This story just gets better and better!
[Report This]Date: October 13 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 36
Wait, one of these 4? We talking Marie, Jerry, Carla, and Vera? You mean no more eliminations or uneliminations? Well, I thought you said this story will end at chapter 47, so I thought a few more switching places would happen.
If there are no more elimination/uneliminations, then there will be no Carla/Andy sex again. :(
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Wow, my reactions to different parts of the story were interesting. When Marie was voting, I was like, seriously? Dale?
Then Jerry's vote confused me. Why Paul!? Isn't Carla the better option!?
Then I thought, oh great, now Paul will be back.
Then Betty introduced her random cycle of fate spinner and I was like, yes! There is hope!
The Carla got chosen, and I was like heck ya!
Then Andy got eliminated, and I was like wtf!
Then Betty starting playing with Andy and I was like, hmmm, this could get interesting.
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Wow, Benton. You surprised me multiple times this chapter.
I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the chapter! There won't be another un-elimination, but there may still be eliminations. Here's a hint: just like last season, this season's final competition will be between three finalists.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 36
Ahh man I was rooting for Andy. Well I hope either Vera or Jerry wins, not based on much reasoning. More just for fun:)
Nice chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's entirely possible one of them will win...but not telling, of coursre!
Date: October 11 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I agree with antitee. I really want Carla for queen.
@Antitee, I agree with those votes, except the one for Marie.
Hailey is the reason why Marie is afraid of being small. Hailey suggested putting Marie inside her. It kinda ruined Marie's dreams about shrinking and turned them into nightmares.
Marie kinda fears Hailey for scaring her and Carla for getting tangled with Andy. She is also upset with Paul and Dale for fighting.
So I think Marie could vote for anyone. She had rough experiences with all those 'naughty' people.
Im still rooting for Carla to win! :)
[Report This]Date: October 11 2014 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 35
Are the contestants within the house going to vote on who gets uneliminated? If so I'm going to say that this is how the votes will go..
Of course, Andy will vote for Carla and Vera for Paul.
Marie - Hailey.
Marie is so close to winning now, she's going to vote for someone she doesn't dislike (like Carla and Dale) and isn't a threat to her (like Paul).
Jerry - Carla
Jerry is the most difficult to predict here, he will vote for whoever will most likely lead to him winning, so he will want to vote for Dale, since Dale has no chance of winning and will in return support Jerry in the future, however Jerry knows that no one else is going to vote for Dale, but he does know that Andy will vote for Carla, so he will vote for Carla knowing that she's hated by all the contestants except for Andy, and because he knows Carla supports her allies. He also wants to ensure Paul doesn't get uneliminated, since the unbroken Paul/Vera alliance will almost certainly lead to one of them winning this late into the contest.
Whatever happens, I'm still going to support the "Carla for Queen" movement, no matter how hopeless it seems!
[Report This]Date: October 11 2014 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 35
Now all four of them are breaking down. I'm starting to feel sorry for all of them.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 35
I think Paul is going to be Uneliminated. But I wish Carla would be uneliminated.
Since it's a vote, I doubt Hailey or Dale will make it back. Paul and Carla are the favorites. If Carla comes back, can she be fullsized as the queen? That would be awesome!
So Paul is still angry about Carla attacking Vera...Geeez, get over it. I thought he was done with that when they had a sex party on Betty.
I feel bad for Hailey, but she was kinda stubborn in the beginning. Hailey, please communicate with your man, u can't just expect all men to worship you like Andy. And don't even thnk about Andy, lol. Carla branded her name on his penis. Haha.
Carla hugging Dale? What is this? I wanted what Paul was thinking; Carla bouncing up and down on Dale, haha. I think Dale wanted the sex too. That's what made him happy for Carla in the first place when Carla kissed him.
Dale, Dale, Dale. What is the show gonna do with you? I think he needs to talk with Tom who hated being shrunk in the first season also. They should get along.
Speaking of Tom, didn't Betty take him to use last night? She returned Dale, but where is Tom? Hmm, I gues Sherri must have him.
Well, i love reading about the naughty ones! Their personalities are much more interesting. Except Dale. He is boring.
Well, I'm sure the next chapter won't be boring so I can't eat to read it!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2014 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 34
Everyone in the compound is so nice now. They all get along very well, and Sherri has gone from Betty Lite when Tom arrived, to a very considerate girlfriend.
Then we have Paul and Carla, who are just trying to survive Betty, and Dale, who is now a victim of both rape and domestic violence. I feel sorry for him. Let's see what they're like.
Author's Response:
Yes, we'll be visiting the "naughty" ones next!
[Report This]Date: October 06 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 34
Man, I totally forgot about this story. I had to reread the previous chapter to see where we left off.
So the first half of this chapter, Sherri and Jerry had some kinky fun, and for the 2nd half, Marie was making a cake. That was basically it. :( Atleast now I know that you will put a lot of detail into these las few hours of these last 2 days.
Well, we finally see the giant male, tiny female experience which was referenced by the tags. I have a feeling that's the last of it though.
Jerry is right. This bunch has is so friendly that I almost got bored reading about it. However, Andy's fantasies kept me going. I mean, hiding in a cake for these giant people to eat. Wow, he really wants the thrill.
Not much to say about this chapter, except that I'm glad you are back. The previous chapter was posted on Sept. 23 I think. I hope the next one is posted sooner. The events at Betty's place are always exciting!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
It is interesting: I never really thought about it, but if you were to over-simplify the characters into "Nice" and "Naughty", you would have Andy, Jerry, Vera, and Marie as the nice ones; and Paul, Dale, Carla, and Hailey as the naughty ones. Makes sense and it's symetrical: two men and two women in each camp. Right now, all the "Nice" ones are in the house and the "Naughty" ones are eliminated. I didn't think about it at the time, but having all the nice ones together takes a bit away from the tension. Things are about to be shaken up, though!
[Report This]Date: September 23 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 33
New day?! Did we just finish the first of the last two days, or is the next chapter the beginning of those two days? If this new means the last day, then Wow, that's like 12 chapters in one day. Seems sketchy. I think the last 2 days are just getting started.
Hmm. This chapter isn't actually that short. It's just short for your standards. Most people write chapters as long as this one. Your other chapters are much longer for which I am grateful for.
Not much happened in this chapter. Marie and Andy had light sex. Jerry and Sherri fell asleep together. Carla, Hailey, Paul going to sleep as Betty uses Tom.
Since Betty took Tom, where is Dale? Is there a threesome? Like I wanna know what's going on back there. Haha.
So Hailey likes Paul, huh? Hmm. And Carla is kinda falling for him too. However Paul is still loyal to his girl, Vera.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
We have just begun the first of the last two days of the competition. In other words, tomorrow (from where we are in the story), we will have a winner! It will take about ten or so chapters to get there, though.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2014 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 32
What a nice date. That's the thing these contestants need to have. A nice date at different sizes and for both of them to enjoy it. That's what the shrinking show is all about.
A whole chapter on Sherri with Jerry. Benton, I'm getting the feeling that I know what you meant by having lots of stuff in these last few days. The next chapter will be a sex scene with Marie and Andy, and after that, there probably will be a scene with Betty and the gang.
So many relationships, so many stories.
What I still wonder is, will Carla and Andy have sex again in this story? Especially if Carla is full sized, and Andy is 4 inches or less!??! I'm still waiting for that.
For some reason, it feels like the season is almost over. People have forgot about the alliances, everyone is having sex, and the good times just get better. It's like a feel good story just waiting to be finished. The good news is that there are 15 more chapters of more fun.
I agree with Sherri. I think Betty is a super genius and she did invent the shrinking machine. When I think about it, she would have to figure out how to shrink or expand living material, first with plants, and then mice, and finally humans. It makes me wonder, how close is our world to the technology of the shrinking show. Although this is a story, in the future, this can be a reality. I'm jealous of all the people who will grow up in a world where shrinking machines are common. At least I'm glad that I'm alive to read this magnificent story.
Last thing. I was hopping Sherri would put her panties. I have yet to see a giantess carry a man in her panties. I don't mean in her vagina, but just sitting as a lump in the panties where the little person could still hear what's going on in the outside world while trapped by some sexy panties. In Season one, there was a glimpse of Sarah having Bill tied to her panties, so I hope something similar comes soon.
Well, this is a very deep and inspiring chapter. It tells us how that this story is greater than a social experiment in a compound and relations can actually matter. We also learned about Betty and I believe every word of it. It's all Betty and she is a rich woman who is bored and wanted to have fun.
A few years later......we got the shrinking show!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed Sherri and Jerry's date scene! As far as Carla and Andy are concerned, you'll just have to wait and see.
It feels like the season is almost over because it truly is. Chronologically speeking we are nearing the very end, but the story tends to thicken around the last few days no matter what season it is as all the setups, character development, and interactions start to pay off, or at least that is my hope.
Well, we know a little bit about Betty from the epilogue of Season One. But now we know a little more. Betty is a mysterious woman, but more will be revealed as time goes on.
I'm really happy you like this story!
[Report This]Date: September 17 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 32
This is an excellent example of a gentle giantess story. Sherri is very kind toward Jerry, and together they have a fun date.
The hints about Betty suggest that you're setting up for something...
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Yes, we are learning a little bit more about Betty here. Part of it is just Sherri begining to figure out what anyone who read the epiloge to Season One aleady knows, but much of it is new information that will come into play later!
[Report This]Date: September 11 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
Marie remains queen. Well, that was kinda obvious.
Well at least Dale is out. Now he will be reunited with Carla who is having sex with Tom. Tom is also having sex with Sherri. Now Sherri is having sex with Jerry.
Everyone had sex except Vera. Hmmmm. I think that Betty will change that soon.
Speaking of Betty, I just wanna quote her when she was talking about vaginas. "You spend 9 months trying to get out and you whole life trying to get in one." That's freaking deep and scary and true. Best line I read all day.
Andy switched with Vera. So Andy is 4 inches tall and Marie is the queen, full sized. Wow, just imagining tonight seems like a wild event.
4 contestants left. Well, I think someone gets to return next time, don't you think? I think so.
Whoa, whoa whoa!???!! 2 days until the winner?!! It's only chapter 31! So 19 chapters in two days? Hmm. Well that sounds rushed, but I wonder how these days will play out.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
-Tom
Author's Response:
Sadly I did not come up with the quote you mentioned--I forget where I heard it. It's a bit of a cliche, but I used it here.
When I said there would be 50 chapters I miscounted. I think the actual total is 47. And it's actually the opposite of rushed--a lot happens in the last couple of days, so more time is taken to cover it!
Date: September 11 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've finally caught up! This series is great! You can definitely tell that you're writing has matured over the years. I like this 2nd group better then the 1st. In the 1st, there were only a couple of characters I cared about, but I care just about every member of this group. I hope that Dale can somehow get it back together before he returns to normal life or he's going to have some problems. Its interesting that some of the more permanant couplings are with people from season one. I'm not sure if Tom and Carla are long term, but I suppose its possible. I wonder what Betty intends to do with her former scientist colleagues in the long term? She doesn't seem like an evil person, just selfish and self absorbed. I can't imagine her killing them when she's done with them, but she can't let them go either as she stole their tech and kidnapped them. I can't imagine her willing to give them "treats" forever either. Maybe she'll set up a little shrinking community with willing and not so willing people that might give them a chance of a "normal" life. I look forward to how this all develops!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! Yes, I like the second group better than the first. And I do have a bit of an "arch" planned for this series if I ever write Seasons Three through Five, so you'll see some of how this plays out!
[Report This]Date: September 09 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have been reading this and loving it so far. I was only disappointed when sherri wouldn't shrink Jerry for Haily to have fun with. I would love to read what would have happened
[Report This]Date: September 08 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
I remember when Dale and Marie voted for Marie to be queen instead of Carla. Also, it was Dale who convinced Jerry to vote for Marie as well.
Now Dale wants Carla over Marie, and now Jerry is against him. I'm betting Dale will be voted off next.
Now the theme is everyone wants Carla. Dale, Andy, Tom and Betty. If there is a vote on who gets to come back, it will probably be Carla, but who knows if Betty wants to have her "life of the sex party" person leave. Carla has become an important person in this competition.
Sherri just switched Jerry and Dale's sizes, just so she could have sex with Jerry?! That's something that Betty would do!
C'mon Marie. Just becuase Jerry and Sherri rhyme doesn't mean that they have some sort of special connection, haha.
Is Tom jealous of Jerry? I bet Sherri did that just to piss Tom off because Tom had sex with Carla multiple times now. Who knows? Sherri might get Jerry eliminated just for that purpose. Sherri will have sex with Jerry while Tom has sex with Carla while they are all inside Betty. Also Paul and Hailey are having sex too.
A decent number of spelling errors especially when you said 'relife' instead of relief. You did that twice. Just a FYI. Also, you said "Jerry cursed fuck" instead of Dale.
I agree with Jerry, i think it's a voting competition next. That maze competition is sure to make everyone a bit sore.
The only person to calm Dale down is Carla. Either Carla is brought back or Dale is eliminated. Carla kissed Dale, so he is kinda obsessed with her being with him. Also she basically saved him the win.
It's funny. Dale won the competition, but he is bummed out. Carla on the otherhand was eliminated, but she is have a great time. This competition can change you, both physically and mentally.
Now I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: September 06 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 29
Awesome story, just read like 20 chapters. It was like i was watching TV or something.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. The Shrinking Show IS a TV show "In Universe", after all.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
Forget the other 5 contestants! This is where the fun is at!
Damn! I love Carla! She played her role like a pro!
Breast feeding Tom, a threesome! She just took over the role play!
I really want to know what Sherri whispered to Hailey. I can't really think of anything that would change her attitude. Well, that's probably why Sherri is the expert.
Tom at 2 inches tall! That's a new record right? I bet Andy will beat it with 1 inch, that is, if he gets eliminated.
Excellent chapter, and thank you for posting quickly again!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: September 05 2014 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
Hailey and Carla have been the only two contestants i've been rooting for, so for me this is the worst possible outcome.
Considering that Sherri and Tom were eliminated last season and were able to return I still have hope for one or both of them to return!
I like how the games are becoming more interesting, have you considered creating (or already have created) a competition where the contestants are at very large size differences and teamed up together, then they would be presented with tasks which could only be completed at specific sizes, it could be very interesting if the smaller member of one team is caught by the larger of another team.
Author's Response:
Unelimination is still possible, so Carla or Hailey could be back!
I actually have thought of the idea that you've mentioned. I'd like to include something like that in Season Three (if I write it), but I'm not exactly sure how to do it just yet.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oooh! So close! I thought it would be Carla and Jerry, but it was Hailey instead that got eliminated.
I see another rivalry. Vera and Carla. Muscular Vera vs quick and agile Carla. I like it. This will obviously stregthen Paul and Vera's relationship since now they both share an enemy.
Haha, Vera was probably scared to death being attacked by Carla with almost no clothes on! She probably thought of so many things at once! Why is she almost naked? Why is she attacking me? Am I going to die? Where is the finish line? No wonder she was going slow toward the finish, or maybe Carla was just that fast. I thought Vera was an athlete, so probably Vera was probably scared.
Wow, I wouldn't mind being tackled by Carla. To be in her undergarments is a bonus. To have her panties ripped is another level.
So Tom wants Carla? Hmm, I don't know what Sherri is going to think.
I noticed a giant male, tiny female tag on this story. The only real relationship with a giant male was when a little Marie was giving a bath to a giant Dale. This tells me that more giants are to come in the future, especially with more guys left in the competition.
I bet the next chapter is like a 6-some with Paul, Tom, Carla, Hailey, Sherri and Betty. It's hard to imagine quite a scene, and that's why I can't wait for the next chapter. Chapter 29!
Author's Response:
Vera is very athletic, but Carla's in pretty good shape herself! Plus she had the element of suprise on her side. Nothing like a good old fashioned catfight. And I don't think anyone here would mind being tackled by Carla! There's at least one M/f scene in the story, hense the tag. And you'll see what happens with the eliminated people next chapter!