[Report This]Date: July 10 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
Tune in next time.
Same Betty time, Same Betty channel.
Author's Response:
Damn right!
[Report This]Date: July 10 2014 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
Current status:
Big: Paul, Andy, Vera, Carla
Small: Dale, Jerry, Hailey, Marie
Next chapter. Yes, I counted:
Big: Andy, Vera, Carla, Marie
Small: Paul, Dale, Jerry, Hailey
And the women get the advantage in the second round. This being Giantessworld, of course you're going to go for giant women primarily, but I have reasons for wondering if that's how people would vote in real life.
I like the blocking vote. The added complication makes it more interesting.
Andy may think Hailey is a little ditzy, but her interest in astronomy suggests that she's smarter than she lets on.
And do ramp up slowly! I expect my sex scenes to be a part of a proper story, and so it's good that you're taking the time to build up.
Would Betty ever allow herself to be shrunk?
Author's Response:
It's funny, because when I was writing the Shrinking Show (both seasons) I actually needed to have a chart to keep track of who was what size at what time! Hopefully it doesn't get too confusing for the readers as things get more complicated.
I think it is likely we would have more large women than men in real life if this kind of competition played out. This is largely because the men would see each other as competition and try to shrink one another rather than the women. The women might do that to each other too, but I think the women would be scared of men larger than them so they might go for shrinking the men as well, which would tip the scales. I could be wrong though, but that's the general thought behind how it turns out in these stories.
As far as Betty, she likes to be in control. Beyond that her preferences and intentions are for now a Mystery...
[Report This]Date: July 08 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
Haha. How does Marie even live her life in college with that demeanor? Its hilarious, I like it.
Anyway, another great chapter.
I really want this situation to happen. I want Andy to be shrunk, then shink again, and again, until he is at the tiniest level. Then I want Carla to dominate him as a full sized person.
That would be awesome.
Little Sherri hiding her antics, I love it. She will probably have her way with all of them in the end anyway.
I try to categorize everyone by size preference so I can anticipate their reactions.
People that want to be small
-Jerry, Andy, Marie.
People that want to be big
-Paul, Vera, Carla, Dale, (i think Hailey too).
The next chapter will be a bit more spiced up, dont you think? Perhaps a little fun with some people?
Well, you already know so I will wait. Cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're liking it so far! Things will get "spiced up" soon, but as I said with these long-form stories I tend to ramp up to that slowly.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2014 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think Marie is my front runner for favorite housemate.
Author's Response:
Awesome!
[Report This]Date: July 08 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Not much action in this chapter, but we got to see the characters act and interact a fair bit, and their personalities are emerging. I'm curious to see what kind of games this story will have, and I was trying to guess what would happen to who. Dale and Hailey may break up, or wind up like Sandra and Bill. Paul seems like he'll be a domineering one, and so will get shrunk relatively quickly. Andy and Marie will love being shrunk.
I'm also curious to see what Betty and Sherri do when the contestants aren't around, whether Sherri knows about the scientists, and whether the machines actually can make you taller than your original height.
Author's Response:
I can tell you that some of these questions are going to be answered soon!
These kinds of longer-form stories I like to ramp up to things slowly, but when it gets going, it's going to be pretty wild.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2014 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
good stuff!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: July 07 2014 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Welcome back. The last one was good, so I expect great things out of this story.
My guess is that Sherri is the four inch person running around. What she was up to, I have no idea.
I've noticed some trends: Bill and Paul are both ex-Navy. Dale and Dave seem similar in some ways, though not identical. Both stories have a quiet, distant woman (Sandra and Carla).
When you say written from 2006-2008, do you mean you spent 2-3 years writing this?
Author's Response:
There are a couple similarities between the characters of the two seasons, but I tried to make sure the characters weren't mere repeats of Season One characters. And I when I said I wrote it from 2006 to 2008, it would be more accurate to say that I wrote it over the course of two years rather than took two years to write it. I started the story in October 2006 and wrote about the first 80 pages over a couple weeks, then I put it aside, picking it up every few months or so to add more, and I finished it with a bit of a final thrust in July 2008.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
First off, congrats on season 1. i forgot to thank you for an amazing story.
Second, I read the tags and read "insertion" so I know it is gonna be good this season.
Third. My favorite part is when a girl takes advatage of a guy sexually, and in Season 1, when Sandra roped Bill to her crotch, I wanted to see more of that female domination in this story.
Fourth, thers a spelling error u missed. When Betty leaves, and Dale sits on the couch, he says "That was ever shown" when i think it should be "that was never shown".
Fifth, Carla seems to be my favorite character. Who knows, I might change my mind.
Sixth, I cant wait for the next chapter, keep it up.
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you enjoyed Season One! I think you're going to like Season Two: the best way to describe it is "Like Season One, but moreso". And yeah, there probably are still some spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, sadly.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
My favorite reality show returns, curious about the mysterious tiny though.
Great stuff.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you will enjoy.