Justice does a great job of skewering the SJW community's excesses, with some cleverly concocted cruelty to boot.

I'm intending to read this all in one sitting, but I have to tell you, after this first chapter I am absolutely in love with your setup. I really appreciate how you've worked the language of gender in here, and then extrapolated it out to a place where a "ciscunt" can exist. Or maybe that's a thing in the radical SJW, I dunno. Either way Anita is terrifying in how realized a fanatic she is. I appreciate how you're twisting the narrative.

I love Anita. I want to be captured by Anita and have her *SPOILERS* cut my cock off. Although maybe it was just the balls. In my mind reading it I saw it as all the bits. And that pause.

I like this a lot.

Tinyone234, I have to say that I like this story, but not for the right reasons. Honestly, the premise is too real for me, and it makes me sad more than it turns me on. Maybe it's because I've recently read a slew of articles here and there about sexual assault or whatever, and how it seems to me that gender relations have become so polarized recently, but I just feel kind of hollow when I read about people who speak and act like they are in your story, even if they are fictional. The part that depresses me is that I have personally encountered radical feminists of the type that you depict that say things like you've written about ("You got into an elevator with me, which is oppressive"), and what really saddens me is that there has to be a reason for such a person to be the way she is -- and that reason has at least some portion of it embedded in reality. Ultimately, your story is very powerful and I will definitely keep reading. Hopefully I'll be able to provide some constructive feedback with subsequent chapters.

Author's Response:

WELL AS A MATTER OF FACT Rebecca is based on Rebecca Watson, a blogger who started "Elevatorgate" after just such an incident occurred, a matter of such infamy that Richard Dawkins himself weighed in on it. All my GTSes are named after various prominent SJWs (Chapter 3 is going to introduce, like, 3-5 more) so MAYBE YOU'LL RECOGNIZE SOME NAMES.