Reviews For Determination
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 50

Let me guess: all the "pets" get "accidentally" killed. :-(

Author's Response:

No, No, no, no, no,... not 'accidentally',... hee hee hee.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 50

I thought I was in the sewer for a sec. I guess I didnt.

Why do I have the feeling that Im gonna die next chapter? I hope not. I would rather die to a sexy MILF than a dozen of school girls.

Aw, the end is near?!!!! I thought it was just the middle! Julianna and Jane just got their pets and Zena barely had any fun with Max.

I would love a part 2; this world is awesome, and the characters have great personalities.

So its gonna get nasty, huh? To me, the more nastier, the more interesting.

I cant wait for the Zena Maxwell chapter!

Author's Response:

  ;~/   Naw,... you're not gonna DIE!  But, you might wish that they WOULD, kill ya!  Sorry, I didn't mean that the story was going to 'ABRUPTLY' just end,... I just meant, that it's now past the halfway point,... and the pace of the story will have to pick up in order for me to get around to all of the other side stories,...

"Zena Maxwell and Max."  "Tim, Spooky, and Jack."  "Cary and Julianna."  "Ajet and Jane."  "Marie, Jim and Sam."..... and the one that I'm working on now; "Major Tom and ******  ;)  sorry, no spoiler's Tom! hee hee hee

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2015 4:03 PM Title: 'Forgiven'

Oh, yeah! My counterpart is definitely going to become a willing love-slave. The question is (to paraphrase Glinda of Oz): "Is that a good thing...or a bad thing?"

Author's Response:

LOL !  ... Nope,.. no spoilers,.. but, you can probably guess.  ;`)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just wanted to say that it is really good the way you show things from the Giantess perspective and also from the tiny guy perspective. It is also great when it reveals details about something else.
Great writing,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks Diesel,  I've tried seperating the p.o.v. of the giantess, from the shrinkee, by writing seperate chapters for each.  And, I've read other author's work where they do an excellent job of it, (JackSmith, for one) but, I've found that the way that I write, it seems to work better if I blend it together within the same chapter.

Although, it seems that I have to slow the pace of the story way down, and it feels like nothings actually happening, so I sometimes switch back and forth, and use both methods.  I guess, that it really depends on what's actually taking place within that particular chapter, before I decide which way to write it...

Thanks for the compliment, I appreciate it very much! 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 6:21 PM Title: 'The Hospital'

Love Zena Maxwell and I am curious what her camera girl does. You do such a good job of painting a picture. Love this story. It would not be bad if she or someone else steps on him. I would assume that she would find someone else. I also am interested in Dr. Elizabeth Harris. She will make a great Giantess. I would assume that she would expect to be obeyed and respected by the little men. You know with the YesMa'am and all of that. It will be great when she does blood test and stool samples.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 12:10 AM Title: 'Scorning the Goddess'

Ahh, a cliffhanger. It would be lame if she killed him. And plus it not like there is a unlimited out of the tiny dudes.

Author's Response:

Haha, yeh,.. but Julianna, is undoubtedly an 'unpredictable' blonde beauty, and she's liable to do just about anything!  ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 9:44 PM Title: 'Scorning the Goddess'

Ha! There is no way that Julianna would just kill her toy just like that!

She just got him from Marie.

I believe that she will step over him, like he is below the arch of her shoe, so he still lives, but gets quite a scare.

I liked the tickling concept, becuase of how much cruelty and control Julianna has. It really makes her queen of torture.

Captain Jim's torture was freaking sexy though, and this wasnt. So, This torture has to be paired up with other things. I just cant believe that Julianna would finish Cary like that when there are many other things to do before he dies.

Julianna was watching Jane torment Ajet, and she was getting horny. I didnt expect a tickling chapter, but I hope its like a setup for something else.

Orrrr!!! Perhaps this is a way that Julianna will find a new tiny! Maybe she does kill Cary! Maybe she finds a little tiny called Tom, hehe.

Otherwise, I find no other reason for her to kill Cary. Jane will probably be dissapointed. Marie will be angry.

My guess is that she just scares him and doesnt kill him. She loves to torment, not kill. She even spared Capt. Jimmy's life.

Nice try Wildcatman, but I believe Cary lives. The real fun begins next chapter. I cant wait!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  After this next chapter, we'll check back in with Major Tom and see how he's holding out!  :`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 8:20 AM Title: 'Scorning the Goddess'

I knew the beeyotch would double-cross me--er, him--at the last second!

Author's Response:

Yes, she's quite the 'devious 0ne', she could have continued to tickle torture that tiny man for the entire night!  Especially, with her mother urging her on,... the two of them together like that would be a very Dangerous situation for a six inch man!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2014 2:16 AM Title: 'Captured'

I just finished chapter 2. So far this is excellent. Nice developing of characters. Looking forward to more chapters. Well done.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I look forward to any input or suggestions. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2014 9:45 AM Title: Cary's Front Row Seat

To take a cold shower. That's where I'M going!

Thanks for the updates, dude. And Happy New Year!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2014 9:30 AM Title: 'Let the Games Begin'

Oh, Julianna is definitely worse than Zavia! Breaks the rules she sets for these "games" when the little guys look like they're going to win. Wants everything her sister has just to deprive her of it. :-(

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2014 1:28 AM Title: Cary's Front Row Seat

Scary situation for the little dudes.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2014 10:54 PM Title: Cary's Front Row Seat

Im still with you. I check this site everyday for new updates from the best of authors here.

I almost forgot. Merry Christmas. Ok, review time.

Last chapter was a cliffhanger that made me think that Julianne was going to toy with Cary this chapter. Well, now since Jane set such a great example, I would be surprised if Julianne postpones the fun again for another chapter.

I think thats the first time that Jane actually did something that I would consider Julianne-like. Im glad Marie is gone. Otherwise she woudldve stopped these activities.

Julianne got turned on by what Jane did to Ajet. Sometimes I think that a simple drop of a tiny man into panties isnt enough to be a turn on for Julianne. I expect her to be a little more creative than Jane and perhaps do similar things that she did to Capt Jimmy.

I envision Julianne as the master of this sexual torture and Jane as a runner-up, and Jane seems to think that she know all the moves. I wonder if Julianne would show something that would blow her mother's mind away.

Last line of this chapter is a great cliffhanger. First, Julianne seductively whsipered that question to Cary. This can only mean that sexy stuff is about to happen. Second, Julianne is already turned on by what she saw from Jane, and now Julianne is going to finish what she started with her fingers. Third, Cary was trying to escape and Julianne caught him, so now Julianne is likely to punish Cary. Especially when we remember that Jimmy was eating from Julianne's muffin and Julianne had probably the best punishment I read on this site. Fourth, its Julianne. This woman is agressive and we witnessed what she is capable of and how little mercy she shows. She is also 28 yrs old, and in my opinion, thats the ideal body that I envision a giantess would have. Fifth, Cary is now Julianne's official pet. She's not borrowing him like what she did with Jimmy. She had fun with Jimmy for 4 chapters. Now that she gets Cary forever, she can do whatever she wants, and thats what makes this such a fantastic cliffhanger.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Starlord73 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Dear god I hope the next chapter comes out soon

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 5:44 PM Title: 'Let the Games Begin'

So, what exactly was the game? It sounded like Ajet had to start from the arm of the couch and get somewhere by also dodging Julianne's fingers. Otherwise, I was kinda confused and couldnt tell if Ajet actually made it or not. Ajet was told the rules, but not me. lol

Ah, now Jane has Ajet, and Julianne has Cary. Marie still has Jimmy and Samuel, but they are exhausted. They should be rested by now though.

When Jane was desciribing the consequences of the game, she made spending time with Julianne as the punishment if Ajet fails at the game. It seemed as though Jane knew that Julianne was more crueler than her. I wonder how Jane knew that, becuase I would love to listen to that discussion.

At one point, Marie said that if Jane and Julianne wanted to use them as slaves, go ahead. However, when Ajet was stuck in Julianne's thighs, Marie found that unnacceptable and wanted Julianne to stop. Those two scenes contradict each other, unless Marie happened to change her mind.

In addition, when Jane was telling Ajet about the punishment of staying with Julianne, Jane said that "he had to do whatever she says, or else." I really want to know what is the 'or else' part becuase I think Julianne has the most humiliating tactics of tormenting these guys. Of course, she is sexy, but in reality to the men, Im not sure what is worse than being tied to a pair of painties and being worn 24/7.

Anyway, Im glad Julianne has a tiny now. Things are starting to heat up and I cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 2:20 AM Title: 'Repression'

Why do I have the feeling that Cary will be the lucky one that Julianne will choose?

Cary just had to form a connection with her...

Since Tracy has Tom, what if Tracy happened to be a good friend of Julianne and they met..? Very unlikely, but it would be interesting.

Glad you brought Julianne back! She was and is the best! Can't wait for the action in the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hang in there Tom.  Major Tom will be back,... he's holding tight, and holding his breath,... butt,  I think, he's gonna make it!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2014 3:02 PM Title: 'Repression'

A truly arousing chapter. Although, with all due respect to you and my literary counterpart, my submissive heart will always belong to the delightfully domineering Zavia.*

*Hint-hint, TinyDann! ;-D

Author's Response:

Aw,... How sweet.    But,  Julianna's not going to like that very much!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2014 2:52 PM Title: 'Jane Get's a New Toy'

P.S. (re: the photo)---the disbelief suspenders could always fantasize that Jane is wearing a wig. Or even a natural strawberry blonde!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 10:08 PM Title: 'Jane Get's a New Toy'

I would love to be in the clutches of Julianne as well.

I know it's unlikely, but will Tom ever end up with Julianna?

He is with Nancy right now, and it would be awesome if Julianne just snatches him up.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 2:48 PM Title: 'Jane Get's a New Toy'

I don't really like Jane to be honest. Not that I'd have any power to stop where I'd end up if I was a tiny. But personally Marie is my favorite GTS of this story but if I HAD to end up with a mean GTS, I'd rather end up with Julianna. Great overall story though!

You must login (register) to review.