[Report This]Date: June 29 2014 4:37 PM Title: Ch. 3 ~ 'Realization'
Much better descriptions of Jane. I like her attitude and her sexual behaviour.
Funny, I just read this story about a bunch of ideas and one had a proposed idea about a world that was 90% female. Is this that story that developed from that idea? If it is, you are doing a great job. It feels like 100% female in Girth. haha.
For the next chapter, I know it will involve Elsa and Samuel, and I know u mentioned that she is overweight. Well, im thinking of her as a person who just finished a weightloss program and now she is a fit, sexy mom. (Just a suggestion, unless you stil want her to be overweight.)
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Dude, it's gunna get a-lot better. There's a few 'up's an down's', for these poor guys, and the best is yet to come! ;`)
I might have to add some additional 'tags' to this, as the story progresses... there seems to be some very interesting things that happen to these guys. Some very strange things too...
[Report This]Date: June 29 2014 2:08 PM Title: Ch. 3 ~ 'Realization'
SO not only are the crew men in on a planet full of females but they are also tiny! It kinda makes that woman that was squashing them earlier on in the story seem like a stupid person. I mean she could have just taken them and sold them for a hefty price or something! Ahh well.
Awesome story wildcat, I'd been missing your work!
Author's Response:
Thanks Gadget, Glad you're into it! Selling them? Not until chapter four.... ;`)
[Report This]Date: June 27 2014 4:27 PM Title: 'Captured'
Looking forward to seeing what happens with the mothers- especially Elsa's mom. I have a special affection for more "homely" giantesses. Nice to see you change it up...
Author's Response:
Thanks Man! And, Yes, I know exactly what you mean! Not all women are 'Super Hot'. This isn't one of those storys. This is Real....
[Report This]Date: June 26 2014 8:29 PM Title: 'Captured'
I agree with Cary, I wished the mothers were more fun and much more sexy.
The waitress mom seems like a very thin drunk woman and sounds creepy, and Elsa's mom seems like a very fat, wrinkled skin covered mom.
Could we change that, or are the moms supposed to be unnatractive. (thats my opinion).
The action was smooth. Only thing that bothered me was the descriptions of the moms.
Anyways, the story is not good, its great! Lots of personalites. Caring waitress, horny mom. Then we have a cruel daughter, gentle mother.
Elsa's mom seems to be my favorite character. She reminds me of a friendly nurse, but her physical characteristics just erased that image. Hopefully she loses that weight by the next chapter. Haha.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! I'm just re-writing this poor little space traveler's memoir'. His journal, of sorts, was left behind when I found it in a used book store. So, I thought that, as a tribute to this poor unfortunate man, I would re-write it, and allow the world to see what he had experience, while crash landing here on this planet. He has some awful times, and some 'great times', I'm just re-telling his story.
I hope he appreciates my effort....;`)
[Report This]Date: June 26 2014 3:32 PM Title: 'Captured'
I almost hate to say it. But, neither of these girls' mothers put the "fun" in "dysfunctional."
Author's Response:
Ah, but they do, put the "Ump" in the "Fumption"... ;`)
[Report This]Date: June 25 2014 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
If there were only six survivors (including the Narrator), then only two--not three--could/should have been squashed by the teenage giantess, following Dickie's death and the capture of the first marine by that African-American giantess. Aside from that one nitpick, I am sufficiently intrigued enough, by this opening chapter, that I will be here for ch. 2!
Author's Response:
Yeah, you're right. I actually tried to have her stomp two of them, and then.. one of them was still alive, so she has to 're-stomp' him; finish him off...
Although, I didn't quite, word it that way, did I? Glad you're following, I always look forward to your input! ;`) Thanks Cary!
[Report This]Date: June 24 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story. A nice setup with touches of sexy stuff. I cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Glad you're on board! I'll try and post each chapter within about 3 or 4 days, no more then a week between them. Don't worry, it's gonna get a whole lot better...
Date: June 23 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like this so far! I'm eager for more, I've always been a fan of your stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks Gadget! This one, will be mostly gentle, but... I might get carried away,... LOL! ;`) You know me... *
[Report This]Date: June 23 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nether good or bad, well mostly good though. Just think it's a interesting story. Like a giantess/twisted version of Cinderella. Which I don't mind.
Glad your back writing. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope to spin out about fifteen or twenty chapters for this one. I'm going to solely focus on this one until it's complete. Hope that you continue to enjoy, and respond with some feedback, thanks for commenting!